#which is that fenris is too scared to want anything (especially a vampire)
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I don't believe in making major edits to stuff I've already posted publicly, but every now and then when I reread my own fic I am sorely tempted.
#that argument in the middle of ch10 of the vampire fic#i would pay real dollars to go back in time and fix that one#they're just saying words and none of it is about the actual conflict#which is that fenris is too scared to want anything (especially a vampire)#but at the same time he's furious hawke won't just sit there and wait for him to come to a decision#i'm scared to try to be happy with you but how dare you be happy with other people#if anyone ever rereads that fic just imagine this is what they yell about right before she bites him#instead of the balderdash they do say#also several chunks of in salt and gold#i was too cowardly to make danarius as evil as he should have been#and a couple things in spire#but anyway that argument is the big one#quark rambles
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