#i was rereading through it like: ohhhhhh nice it flows well. Now what was the reason alec and mel got targeted? | Explore Tumblr Posts and Blogs

aria0fgold · 1 month

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Also I went and read up on my notes bout reworking some OCs' stories and like, I love you past Aria for doing such work but also gurl... You kinda forgot a Very Important detail here... WHY? Why was Alec and Mel kidnapped?????? Bro you can't just go "wrong place, wrong time" here, that's an ORGANIZED CRIME GROUP. It's a huge organization too, I can't believe I forgot the most important question as to Why. I'm never done with reworking the stories bro....

#aria rants #i was rereading through it like: ohhhhhh nice it flows well. Now what was the reason alec and mel got targeted?#and reading through some more and my past self did not address the Why other than #wrong time wrong place and am like... gurl...... if this gigantic organization just snatched ppl off #the street randomly then it wouldnt have grown That big under the governments' radar like that #this cant be a wrong time and place its an ORGANIZED crime group! it was nearly okay too...#nearly. theres still so much to fill in and now i gotta patch up a glaring plot hole once again #this is why its always a good thing to reread notes after awhile with a new fresh set #of eyes and perspective cuz you can rlly see the problems then. back to the writing board......

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