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chryzure-archive · 1 year

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no fucking wonder evangeline does nothing in the books. apparently stephanie plotted the second novel from jacks’s pov. girl, you forgot your main character needs shit to do while jacks is off scheming

#memorie.txt #if i were to do this it would jst end w jacks coming home expecting chrysi sitting waiting for him #but he sees a note on the kitchen table that’s like ‘got bored. went ghost-hunting. xoxo’ HE WAS SUPPOSED TO BE THE ONE DOING COOL STUFF #…..also epilogue—commencement & closure is written from jacks’s pov and it’s him doing stuff for chrysi #BUT chrysi’s at home tracking azure down. the ending (that you won’t see in the fic itself) is jacks coming home to an empty house #withOUT the information he wanted—and chrysi comes home a couple days later w the knowledge of her past life bc she found out as well #something something the stars make it so the trio is all on the same page at the same time.. possibly #anyway what i’m getting at is this: whenever jacks is off doing something i don’t leave chrysi in a white void #she’s ALWAYS doing something #she can’t NOT be doing something. she’s too antsy #god. that’s not how you plot out a novel!!!!!!!!! fuck!!!!!!#i’m just so irritated by authors lately bc it’s like… no. don’t do your craft that way #like ali hazelwood confessing that her agent tells her what tropes to write and how to write them #why are you an author then??? go develop a fucking story from your own brain #and that whole lightlark thing.. fucking hell.#i’ve got strong feelings on books and writing as a whole #i should find an ask game abt books but flmdjfkhska. i have work.#hopefully i can write some more when i get home though!!

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