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agoddamn · 2 months
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Tales of Duviri is a storybook written by Euleria Entrati for the purpose of teaching children how to handle the manic flood of emotion that comes with Void exposure.
I pose a question: why does Euleria feel so strongly about this?
Her interactions with her own children are... let's call them wanting, and dialog implies that the negative aspects of their relationship--her denigrating, controlling nature, the distrust, etc--did not begin only after the Infestation brainrot set in.
We also know that she holds her father in extremely high esteem, but Albrecht did not think much of Tales of Duviri (see: him talking about his previous disdain for it in his own Duviri notes). Euleria put resources into writing Tales of Duviri instead of more traditional science, and Albrecht did not think much of it.
So why did Euleria write Tales of Duviri?
Let's rewind a step. Void exposure-induced mania, the whole thing Tales of Duviri is written to help manage.
How was that discovered and studied? It clearly was studied, enough to be a recognized condition and for the Orokin to build the iso vaults and for Euleria to write Tales of Duviri. But who would they have observed this mania in if Void research was an abandoned dead-end line of study?
Perhaps...the man obsessed with the Void who'd survived an unshielded Void dive?
Euleria had patient zero of Void mania sitting at her dinner table. Albrecht is the character who's undoubtedly had the most Void exposure.
Albrecht himself must have exhibited the Void mania and mood swings that Tales of Duviri exists to teach caution of.
And that's why Euleria wrote it; she had this gyroscope of a mood swing at home. She admired Albrecht too much to consciously deride his lack of control as irresponsible and so she channeled her energy into writing Tales of Duviri instead.
The emotion spirals of Duviri are loosely based off of what Euleria witnessed in the Entrati household and particularly Albrecht himself.
I don't believe that any courtier is a 1:1 translation of a member of the Entrati household, but more that their toxic interactions and dramatic heights reflected things that Euleria herself saw--or lived.
This reading of the Duviri characters and story--that they mean things to Euleria specifically--gives us a fun new lens to look at all of the chapters with.
For example, Mathila.
"Two children, and no memory of her husband. Poor Mathila."
Two children like Euleria herself, eh?
Mathila loved her husband. He also textually does not exist. He's not on the screen or in the text. He is a memory, and one that Mathila herself cannot even remember. There is no portrayal of their love.
Pivot to a writer's perspective. You need to write a loving relationship. You look to real life for inspiration, right? If you're a married woman needing to write a married woman in love, you naturally look to your own relationship.
And if you can't find anything to base that love off of? Well...move that character offscreen. Just tell about the loving relationship, don't show. Actually, do you even have anything to tell about? Well. Move the entire loving relationship offscreen, then. She's got amnesia. Nobody needs to talk about the love to sell it or make it feel real now. The narrator can simply mention it as a fact and it need not be challenged. Euleria doesn't have to imagine a loving family life between a husband and wife and their two children and question why that's hard for her. There. Problem fucking solved.
Another parallel that fairly started screaming at me once I started considering that the Duviri courtiers had meaning to Euleria specifically: Luscinia.
"I was created to be Sorrow, written into being, to serve as a lesson... can that change?"
Luscinia knows that she is a tool. As much as she dreams of being more, she knows very well that she is a tool--both a literal narrative element to teach a lesson and within the story itself Thrax's servant (his personal songbird).
Is there anyone in Euleria's life who might have some angst over their position as a tool? A servant who wants to escape the limited definitions of their role?
And so... here I am, back to my old role. The diligent servant. Albrecht would have smiled at that, I think.
Loid. It's Loid.
Luscinia: "This structure and I share much. Both of us once useful, both of us discarded, both of us now derelict. Both forgotten." Loid: "How might this relic make himself useful today?"
Both Luscinia and Loid are also capable of surprising amounts of ruthless violence. Luscinia has no hesitation telling you to kill the Dax or otherwise wreak vengeance on her jailers. Loid's Necramech lines feature him ranging from being excited for ensuing violence to coldly promising the Murmur regret.
The Duviri Tales were a subconscious form of therapy for Euleria herself as well, allowing her to write a story where emotional explosions were a problem that must be addressed rather than a social struggle to be suffered through at the whims of the more powerful.
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agoddamn · 2 months
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@cardinalgoldenbrow not quite. Something else fell into Duviri.
Not a whole person, but a piece so significant and meaningful that it kicked off the entire paradox meltdown sequence.
The Lotus's hand.
The Lotus had enough conceptual weight to her to give the Drifter the power of the Void, a power the Lotus herself never even had. She is so strongly connected to the Tenno that she connects the Drifter to them by way of her own hand.
Why, then, wouldn't that be conceptually powerful enough to birth a denizen of Duviri?
Gender? Means nothing. Thrax is male and can be spawned from a female Drifter all the same.
Timeline? Duviri experiences time in a way that isn't linear to the Origin System. We already know this thanks to Teshin having been living in Duviri a long time by the time the Lotus's hand lands even though they fell at about the same time.
Let's look at the major beats here.
First, why is Ballas the Warden to Kullervo? "Because he's an Orokin, he's a ruler, the Drifter saw his portraits as a child!" Yeah, plausible, but by that logic Tuvul should be the Warden. Tuvul drove much of the Zariman project. His statues are all over it. The Commons are even named for him. If the Drifter were unconsciously reaching for any authority figure, it should have been Tuvul.
Speaking of authority figures, Executors don't rule Duviri. A king does. Kullervo's texts talk explicitly about Executors and other things about the Origin System in a way that doesn't match Duviri's canon. Why import Ballas as an authority figure and then demote him to Warden all while acknowledging that he ought to be an Executor?
Let's read Kullervo's story.
Hated Kullervo, did you truly believe he could love you? 
Oh, huh. Kullervo was in love with an Executor. One of the Seven. That's--rare. Who would love one of those assholes?
Kullervo's criminal trajectory is most strange. He was in love with an Executor, killed an Orokin to prove it, obeyed a direct Orokin order (why does an authority figure call this a crime?), killed someone like a mother to him--an Archimedean he was trying to rescue from Orokin custody, odd detail there--then attacked the Orokin again, then orchestrated the Night of the Naga Drums.
Man's got loyalties like a ping-pong ball, huh? Why?
The children's rhymes tell a rather different story.
An enslaved warrior torn from his mother. He was born to fight, eventually learned a truth of his birth, saw his home lost. He bursts into a rage, murders, and then kills himself.
This is much much much more straightforward. You'll notice that the children's rhymes don't mention Origin System concepts like Executors, either. Nothing about love.
Why all the complication?
Two distinct narratives, both tossing in details that beg for more elaboration. Why do this, as a writer? Why spend the voice actors' time like this?
I can only think it was done on purpose.
Two different stories, two different readings on the same person. One from Ballas, one from children.
(Huh. They say Kullervo is a friend to children, don't they?)
The Lotus lived very different lives from the perspectives of Ballas versus her Tenno.
Natah was born to war, a mimic spy with a purpose. She left her family--not by choice--and killed her fellow Sentients as the Lotus; a betrayer. She then orchestrated the Night of the Naga Drums; a betrayer twice over, the mother of a bloodbath.
Ballas sees her as a betrayer, someone who loved him and threw him away.
We see beats of Margulis's story here, too--an Archimedean that was like a mother, killed in a struggle that wouldn't have existed if not for the choice of resistance.
Kullervo isn't literally the Lotus, but I believe that he was conceptually born from her.
His stories contain the major beats of her life, only slightly twisted by perspective. Those details are so specific--in love with an Executor? Betrayed their own kind, and then their 'ruler'? A mother figure (so specific! Why not just have her as his mother?) who was an Archimedean, killed because of resisting the authority that ruled them both?
Kullervo is made up of her pieces, like a collage.
I believe that Ballas's presence and the sudden mention of Executors when that doesn't match the rest of Duviri are supposed to be clues to us that something from the Origin System has leaked in to birth Kullervo, that he is not simply an independent figure that existed in the past. When Teshin and Albrecht rolled into Duviri, they did simply that--they entered Duviri and adopted its ways while they lived there. They didn't come with an entire chapter of a story that isn't from the Duviri Tales.
Another point to Kullervo being born from Duviri is that he is treated like he exists in Duviri. Nobody says that he suddenly appeared like Albrecht or Teshin. Acrithis talks about him as if he's a part of the story. They all know his history. It's only the Warden who relates such a different history.
I think that the name Kullervo probably did exist as some minor character in the original Duviri Tales. The Drifter's subconscious applied this to the tangle of trauma that the Lotus conceptually exists as.
tl;dr Kullervotus
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agoddamn · 5 months
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The fact that Loid struggles so much to accept/believe Albrecht's last words makes me think that Albrecht was being unusually tender/explicit in their last scene. But...the text in Albrecht's Notes I've seen so far is also quite tender.
Thoughts:
First, hypothesis that the Notes were not written contemporaneously and Albrecht's more affectionate internal narration reflects his attitude later in life moreso than how he acted at the time. Albrecht does admit on the tapes that he never said the words Loid wanted to hear; I think Loid isn't getting his fears of being manipulated from nowhere. I think that "my Loid" from Albrecht at the last minute was new and Loid went to his cryosleep second-guessing everything.
By the way, let's go over some of Loid's canon duties:
Personally nursing Albrecht back to health after the Void melted his face off (if I'm understanding the Note right he even read poetry at his bedside)
Taking care of Albrecht's child and grandchildren (Mother is noted to get her habit of dumbing things down from Loid and Brother mentions piggyback rides from him)
Stanning Albrecht in academic circles (that bit about trying to deflect public criticism of Albrecht onto him)
Sourcing endangered animals (the antelope endlings were acquired by him)
Taking charge of the Cavia
Taking charge of the lab's defenses (he comments during mirror defense that he worked on the defense system)
Smashing Albrecht's body with a hammer
Giving up his entire life to dedicate himself to fulfilling Albrecht's "break glass in case of doomsday" plan
Loid was around (though apparently not physically present) for the Void first contact experiment, a time when Albrecht notes that his assistants had dwindled away and he was nearly in academic disgrace. For all that he's called a servant, all this looks more like the behavior of a partner than anything else.
You know, I had thought before this update that Mother and NecraLoid had a really strange relationship; why is she so suspicious of a robot servant? She's infested-crazy, yeah, but NecraLoid's only secret actions at that point were selling the player necramech parts, which is something Mother indirectly wants to happen anyway. She should think he's nothing.
But if Mother knew Loid as a family mainstay, an "uncle" who'd been there for decades that worked hand-in-hand with the glorious father she admired--now her confusion and suspicion as to the changed power differential between them makes a lot more sense. Loid was never just a butler and a purely manservant robot version of him makes no sense to her.
And if Albrecht is half the notoriously cold, science-minded manipulator Loid's grumblings make him out to be--and Mother knows that--and Mother thinks there was something more to Albrecht's disappearance, and that Loid had something to do with it (which, she's right about both of those)--now her thinly-veiled hostility to NecraLoid makes a lot more sense.
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agoddamn · 1 year
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IMO...
The MadaTobi vibe is "destiny took a hard left." Madara and Tobirama are not the fated pair set up by the story and an eon of reincarnation. Hashirama is the one who's Madara's equal in battle, he's Madara's meaningful friend, Madara is his man of destiny. Hashirama and Madara are mutually obsessed. Their relationship is set up as a Huge Thing.
So MadaTobi is at its best leaning into that narrative asymmetry, I think. The curious contradictions. The feeling of "this wasn't meant to happen." They were clearly never meant to really interact in a narrative sense, so you wonder--what if they did get to talk?
They've got those interesting little bits where they espouse ideas that are similar, they have a massive unresolved beef, they have a strange binary star kind of orbit where they're linked in each other's gravity well without an immediate connection. Plenty to build on there. You can even get cute with some (likely unintended) thematic parallels like fire/water, red/blue, black/white.
TobiIzu is more out-of-the-box prepped for you by the narrative (last younger brothers, both left behind by big bro, close in strength, doomed to end in violence), but I think it's actually harder to nail down. Maybe because we have so little canon info on Izuna? And while Madara and Tobirama got to hiss and spit at each other on-page like bitter divorcees Izuna and Tobirama only interact in battle. They can easily fall into a pair-the-spares sitch; you're pairing up Hashirama and Madara so you may as well pair off the other brothers while you're at it.
But Tobirama and Izuna...they're parallels, but they're tainted parallels. Everything that makes the Hashirama-Madara relationship fairytale makes the Tobirama-Izuna relationship tragic. The destiny narrative dooms them to be tools of the story--dooms Tobirama to be Hashirama's bloodied right hand and Izuna to be Madara's tragic backstory.
Because of that I feel like the relationship only truly works when Hashirama and Madara aren't together. Narratively, Tobirama and Izuna need to be in a story where they're finally the important ones. Their relationship working is inextricably tied with the idea of them making selfish choices over their brothers, I think--both are improbable and need to be carefully set up.
They are otherwise bound to live--narratively and literally--in service of their brothers. The traditional supporting character relationship is more like codependency when looked at with a more realistic lens, and Tobirama and Izuna are prime examples of that. They need to be hewn away from their fraternal supports in order to develop something new. They cannot be retreading the ground of Hashirama and Madara.
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(Personally I think some tbiz goes too far in the fanon 'poor little meow meow Tobirama' direction...although, I have to admit that in a world where Izuna somehow fell in love with Tobirama, I think that his perspective on Tobirama would definitely be "my poor little meow meow" lmao that sort of disproportionate "everyone is bullying MY poor woobie" kinda possessive protectiveness)
Without a Softness Showing is my gold standard for Tobirama and Izuna interaction. Blew my tits clean off and it's not even romantic.
(This post brought to you by a lengthy mental ramble of mine where I bemoaned the lack of porn where twink Izuna mating presses 6-ft Tobirama and lamented that I don't have the chops to pull it off myself.)
(Anyway, someone ought to write that.)
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agoddamn · 2 years
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Absolutely wilding that Tobirama's take on ending war is "people should just stop having feelings." I mean, it is a very nine-year-old take but it's pretty clear he holds that stance close for the rest of his life (may not be great at following it, but holds the idea). I like the interpretations that have him semi-parenting his other siblings; we can see that he's already got the "just shut your mouth and do what needs to be done because nobody else is going to" philosophy of parentified kids down.
I mostly don't like the interpretations that stretch sensor types to basically empaths because I feel like it loses some of what makes the idea unique to Naruto (the active choice to sense, the limited nature of the ability). For Tobirama, though...it feels fitting to me that he'd have a hypersensitivity to aggression. Not reading feelings as a whole, but just aggression/violence.
It helps paper over a few inconsistencies regarding how good sensing is supposed to be, and for a kid that ended up playing promoted-parent, that's exactly the skillset you end up with--hypersensitivity to when things are about to go bad, because it's going to be your job to head that off at the pass. That trained hypersensitivity can also set you to jumping at shadows or making people think that you're looking for a fight, because, well...you are, in a sense. You never trust, you're always looking for how a situation is going to go bad and how you're going to get out in one piece.
Notice I didn't say win, I said get out. In the scene with Kawarama's grave, Tobirama lies to and appeases Butsuma even though his personal feelings are the opposite. His goal was not to prove the rightness of his philosophy, but to get Hashirama (and Itama) out of the funeral without further violence. Even for a shonen manga with bloodthirsty nine-year-olds, that's thinking a lot of steps ahead with a lot of subterfuge--and it's not even a canon-typical level of child insight, because Itama and Hashirama standing right there fail to defuse the scene.
In spite of running jokes about how dumb he is working up a lot of steam, Hashirama is not incapable of subterfuge or thinking ahead! He suspects Madara's identity from the first five minutes they meet, identifying Madara's stone-skipping as identical to shuriken-throwing. He recognizes this, recognizes that there would be negative consequences if he let on the truth about what he was seeing, and played dumb. And it worked. Hashirama absolutely had the skillset necessary to talk Butsuma down in the funeral scene and had already demonstrated skill with it.
Hashirama wanted to win against Butsuma; Tobirama wanted to survive.
And I think this behavior tracks neatly with his lifelong paranoia about Madara; even when it's sabotaging himself, he cannot stop fixating on how things can go wrong and how he can contain the damage.
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agoddamn · 9 months
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TOS McCoy (and specifically TOS McCoy, not AOS) strikes me as the sort of person who overacts being acerbic to either hide or compensate for the fact that they're really easy to take advantage of.
Because, look at the way he acts! Look how he folds to beings who he knows want to hurt him (salt creature, Mirror Spock) solely out of his own sentimentalism/nostalgia. Mirror Spock wasn't even asking for help--McCoy just could not allow himself to leave.
And he knows this on some level, I think, which is why he leans into the curmudgeon act--he can't stop himself from folding like wet paper when someone else wants something from him, so he makes the pre-emptive effort to push them away by being a massive bitch. People can't take advantage of you if they don't realize you're an easy mark, right?
(He is also just naturally inclined to grouching, I think.)
I think this helps explain his thing with Natira, too--for someone primed to give and overgive like McCoy, someone not requiring anything from you is like a fantasy. There was no personal history on the Yonada, no connections, nobody needed anything from him. It was the perfect hiding place for someone running from himself and his own failing to make everybody happy.
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agoddamn · 2 years
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1) interesting choice of oath when Tobirama both has beef with his father and never has children
2) Madara trying to force Hashirama to kill his brother or himself also very much explains Tobirama's grudge lmao unlike Izuna, this wasn't even mid-battle; Madara just wanted Hashirama to kill Tobirama out of some abstract cosmic punishment.
It also seems like Tobirama never gets validated in his feelings here; Hashirama just gives him a cajoling "be nice to the Uchiha now!" at every turn and considers it no harm no foul, but man...
If the positions had been switched, if Hashirama ordered Madara to kill Izuna or himself to earn forgiveness, nobody would blink at Izuna carrying a grudge about that and talking shit about Senju even through peacetime.
And since Tobirama never gets his feelings validated, they fester and he tries to rationalize it as "Uchiha are just crazy" because the alternative is "my brother loves a man who tried to force him to kill me" or even "for a moment I really thought my brother was going to kill me" and he's not confronting those without a level of therapy that doesn't exist in Narutoland.
Any time Tobirama complains about Uchiha in general, it seems more like he's actually talking about Madara specifically and trying to cloak it in generalities. The democracy convo--he goes right from claiming Madara is unelectable to saying that the strongest Uchiha eyes are most dangerous. He hasn't actually changed subjects; Madara has the strongest Uchiha eyes. Threatening Sasuke--he says trying to destroy Konoha is just like an Uchiha, but the only Uchiha who's ever done that who he's aware of is Madara.
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agoddamn · 2 years
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Stranger Things is a show about the 80s.
I don't think this is a thesis I have to prove, right? It's in the damn Netflix summary. The Goonies, Stephen King, Star Wars, arcades, Reagan, Cold War--it's very purposely an 80s show about 80s stuff.
With that in mind, it feels very purposeful that its antagonist is a product of the 50s.
S4 foregrounds the theme of time very literally: people are stalked by a clock, for Christ's sake. You can't get more blatant than that. Brenner is obsessed with trying to regress Eleven to an earlier time, a child he could easily control.
As far as we know right now, there's no mechanical reason for Henry Creel to be twenty years older than all the other subjects. He didn't need to be the child of the Greatest Generation, a returning WW2 vet. There's no reason Creel couldn't have been a child of the 60s, or even early 70s.
But they made him a child of the 50s.
The 50s are typically associated with innocence, paradise, "a simpler time," "the greatest generation." WW2 is "the last good war," to the point where even modern comic books still rely on Nazi bad guys for uncomplicated villains.
Henry Creel's motivation is disillusionment.
He peers into his father's mind--his decorated hero soldier father, his good guy Nazi-killing father--and instead finds a man murdering a family, a man lighting a baby on fire. He can't stand it. He can't cope with it. He can't reconcile this man's continued existence with his murdering a baby.
He peered into his mother's mind and finds a woman planning to get rid of him. And although he couldn't have known the extreme extent of Brenner's cruelty at that point, I don't think it's far-fetched for Henry to have known that asylums were not kind places.
Henry Creel is a child of the 1950s because he represents a disillusionment with the 1950s. The idyllic image people have of the 1950s is categorically false. Even the "last just war" was full of atrocities on the side of the good guys.
Thematically, this is also why he doesn't re-emerge until the 1980s; after the growing revolution of the 60s and the liberation of the 70s, the 80s are associated with cynicism and the death of the American dream (remember all those Reagan signs?). If Henry Creel represents the fruit from the rotten tree of American nostalgia, naturally he should bloom during the 80s.
Bringing things full circle, Stephen King's It features seeds planted in the late 50s blooming in the 80s. As much as It is clearly a huge influence on Stranger Things, I think this is a case of parallel evolution moreso than purposeful nod. The rot from the 50s sends it all tumbling down in the 80s. That's just how America works.
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agoddamn · 2 years
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I had my Teenage Girl Hate phase with Sakura (I was twelve, it's allowed) but over time I found myself really digging her concept...or, her apparent concept at the time. The whole thing where her shallow girly facade is completely fake and her mimicking what she thinks popular/well-liked girls act like because she's self-conscious and anxious, I dig the hell out of it. The self-sabotaging complexity of her relationship with Ino where she so badly wanted to be as cool/respected/self-actualized as Ino that she was willing to torch the friendship--love that.
The potential comphet reading of a hyperfeminine-looking girl forcing herself to act even more feminine for social acceptance--that's some chef's kiss shit, especially when you take her homoerotic rival parallels with Ino in the context of Naruto and Sasuke's relationship (where Naruto has a shallow crush that he grows out of and comes to admit that the real most important relationship to him is someone he clashed with was there some irrelevant girl involved? Ah, whatever).
She's also got the coveted everyman angle into the story, where she doesn't have a special bloodline or traumatic childhood like everyone else in Konoha.
All Kishimoto had to do was keep doing what he had already set up with her--finding her feet and growing into a real person as opposed to the shallow caricature she acted like as a child when she had no self-confidence.
But...we all know how that went. I honestly think he kinda psyched himself out, focused too hard on "omg she's a girl I can't write girls" because her building blocks are solid. Yes, young Sakura is obnoxious, but so are young Naruto and Sasuke! And then he had to pivot to franchising and setting up a "next generation" series, and her ability to give Sasuke another Uchiha overrode any other potential narrative value. Kishimoto was eager for any excuse to get out of developing her and giving her Main Character levels of focus. Those interview segments where he talks about how she was really unpopular so he tried to fix that in Shippuden by making her prettier...painful.
(I feel like SasuSaku is like the narrative inversion of VegeBul where Bulma ended up being Trunks's mother because she was the only unmarried female character Toriyama remembered he had, except with VegeBul their relationship added an unexpected, interesting texture to both characters and created a surprisingly memorable relationship running counter to many common tropes at the time*. VegeBul came out stronger for its narrative practicality-related origins and SasuSaku did...not.)
[*Please do not mistake this for me trying to claim that "DBZ is woke actually," I'm only saying that 90s shonen didn't often have successful unmarried moms.]
So I think that she also ultimately ends up as another casualty of Naruto's narrative paradox--that thing where the series is set up on "shinobi shouldn't just be tools" but it's a shonen and it cannot follow through on that principle because shonen need to have cool fights. In a shonen framework, making her a healer limited her even further thanks to narrative values of shonen (beams = good).
(I could make a whole post on how fictional healing is extremely hard to write tbh)
tl;dr my personal edition of the "Sakura was done dirty" post.
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agoddamn · 5 months
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Citrine's mission is the perfect example of what I call Warframe's quantum lore.
Belric and Rania preserved in death by Citrine's final choice, how tragic! Except, Citrine was carrying out her orders and never had an option to disobey. And Citrine didn't actually die, because Citrine was a robot being remotely piloted. And the Orokin were authoritarian slavers.
I'm left sitting at the quest going, "I have no idea what you want me to feel." Is it supposed to be dripping with irony in that all of its major facts are false? It really never gave me that vibe. Citrine's defining traits are clearly presented as loyalty in spite of the fact that she never chose to sacrifice herself.
The Lotus damn well knows all that shit about the true nature of Warframes and the Orokin, but because the quest must be written in a way that's compliant with the Second Dream reveal she cannot meaningfully engage with anything that happens and instead simpers on about honoring Citrine's sacrifice.
I never actually developed the fondness for "space mom" that a lot of the fandom did because of that peculiar double-talk she pulls off post-Second Dream.
The narrative can't genuinely engage with the Tenno and how they feel about discovering that they're a person because they're a player-insert, and because the Lotus's dialog needs to be compliant with an infinitely scaling amount of Content she can never change how she acts, either. It leaves her feeling like she's lying/manipulating/deflecting (because the narrative is) and I found it annoying and hollow.
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agoddamn · 2 years
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Stranger Things 4 spoilers
I'll make a more complete post once I watch the finale, but having just finished all the Lab backstory stuff--
Man, am I the only one finding Vecna's backstory of "he's just cuhrazyyy" surprisingly disappointing? Dude spent 20 (checked the timeline) years under Brenner's tender care and they come in with "well he was crazy before that"? It makes the plots feel stitched together in a disparate sense.
It also feels...look, I'm glad we got Brenner being explicitly ventilated onscreen, and I'm glad Eleven got to ice him out with that final silent judgment ("you have to tell me that you understand I did it for you"/"...") but it often feels like the narrative finds Brenner a morally ambiguous figure instead of an evil one. I was clearly supposed to be feeling something other that "ding dong the witch is dead" with that dramatic dolly-spiral out on Brenner slumped in a Christ pose.
And like... I'm not one to jump on the Draco in Leather Pants woobiefication, but Vecna's stated goal of "I killed my family because my mother was about to put me in a torture facility" isn't that crazy! Eleven has killed tons of people to stay out of Hawkins Lab.
Similarly, the whole "he manipulated Eleven to let him out!" bit doesn't land with me. Not only is it a bit of a far-fetched plan (it hinges on Vecna's accurate judgement of an abused, unsocialized little girl's empathy and adherence to moral societal norms), but getting out of Hawkins Lab is not ethically bad. Manipulating someone to get out of a torture facility is not evil. Killing the kids after obviously was! But...again, back to the accidental comedy of "my god, someone murdered the kids I was in the middle of abusing!" Vecna didn't create that situation.
That monologue they had him give after it also felt very unnecessary; did they really need to have him stand there and go "btw I did all this totally premeditated because I am super evil" when it's pretty easy to believe that the guy might see death as a form of release from the torture facility?
I guess the point I'm struggling to arrive at here is that imprisonment and torture in Hawkins Lab appears to have done nothing to Vecna's character; he was already super evil 100% tv crazy psycho man since he was a little kid and years of torture somehow didn't exacerbate that or shape him at all.
The show clearly wants him to be a parallel to Eleven, but how much of a meaningful parallel can he be if his arc is "btw unlike Eleven he was completely evil from the beginning"? Making him inherently evil wastes his whole tenure in Hawkins Lab. Her experiences in Hawkins Lab are what shaped Eleven, but Vecna was already pre-formed; what kind of parallel is that?
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agoddamn · 2 years
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I'd very much like to get you started on socioeconomic underpinnings kishimito won't. If that's cool with you
ALRIGHT. SO. I'm doing this on mobile so it's gonna be super messy, bear with me.
First of all, what shaped the real-life warring states era? A lot of things, but I'm going to focus on two: technology and social mobility.
Japan was introduced to the arquebus in 1543. Guns completely and totally changed the face of war; no longer did you need a warrior with years of training and conditioning to win a battle. Guns were a massive equalizer. 
(This has happened to a lesser degree with other weapons throughout history–polearm and longbow, frex. Having effective, accessible weapons hugely upsets the previous balance of power. The gun, though, easily had the most revolutionary effect.)
So the previous armies became less useful, and technology--or, more specifically, the ability to kill people from either a greater distance or with greater ease/less training--became the thing that won you wars.
(A bit of an oversimplification; obviously resources and strategy and such mattered very much as well. But for Christ's sake I'm writing this for Naruto so we're gonna be a little less involved than a textbook.)
A ninja can kill at least as effectively as a gun (probably way more).
That brings us to the second issue, social class. There are two ways to control a population: direct and indirect. Take the idea of staying in a line. You can be kept in the line directly by having a guy with a stick hit you if you step out. You can also be kept in the line indirectly by being made to believe that you shouldn't step out of line, and this can be through positive or negative concepts; you believe that stepping out of line is dishonorable, or that it will cause you to lose a competition, or that the ground will crumble under your feet. 
Direct control becomes harder and harder the larger a population gets, for obvious reasons. The physical strength/technological capabilities of the population also becomes an issue; guards with sticks won't have any power if the people they're trying to keep in line are wearing armor.
So, indirect control works better for a large population. In real-life historical Japan, forms of indirect control were religion, class, and family loyalty.
Narutoland is missing most of those. 
Although people from large clans have an obvious advantage, we don't actually see any enmity towards shinobi from no-name families like Sakura or Lee. Nobody is scandalized by Sakura Nobody beating heiress of highly-placed and venerable clan Ino Yamanaka. There's no resistance to social mobility. 
(In real life, public schools were often opposed by the upper class because they represented social mobility and threatened the power of that form of indirect social control.)
And there's no religion in Narutoland, not on any large scale like the real-life worship of the Emperor.
"But what about the whole Will of Fire bullshit? That has to be indirect control!" Oh, it is! But there's two problems there. First is that Will of Fire encourages loyalty to the Hokage and not the daimyo. Second is that Will of Fire didn't exist in the Warring States era at all. 
So what are they fighting for in the Warring States era, Senju and Uchiha? Land? Money? What do these assholes want? 
They're not doing it for religion. They're not doing it to enforce a social punishment. They're not doing it because the daimyo told them. You can make a general assumption that it's food or money though, right? That's what all wars are fought over in the end. Well…
It's telling that most fix-it fic works by just having an actual, specific conflict (ie food shortage or being over-taxed) because once you have a definable problem you can work to address it. Kishimoto cheats by never identifying a problem so he can have the characters moan about how unsolvable it all is, when it's only unsolvable because Kishi chose to avoid having something tangible to address. 
tl;dr Warring States lacks both the social reasons for war (religion, loyalty to a daimyo) and the economic reasons. Furthermore, the military power structure is completely contradictory to a feudalist setup because ninja are far too powerful to be waging war the way they do.
The whole situation essentially uses the war as a proxy for a battle of ideals/principles; the actual war bits with people dying are just set dressing. The Warring States era only functions in this metaphorical way. In that sense, the whole situation doesn't need to make logical sense; it's just an allegory, a backdrop for belief A versus belief B.
So basically–
Ninja are so strong that they NEED some serious form of indirect social control to keep them loyal to the daimyo and that's just not there. Furthermore, they're so strong that they should have rocketed past this form of social strata ages ago. 
And, you know, while we're here, putting kids on the battlefield makes no fucking sense! It's very sad and all, but it's gibberish! A child represents an investment that takes years to return dividends. Getting your kid killed before they can reproduce is a massive waste of resources. 
"But Boots, there are child soldiers in real life!" Yeah, and modern child soldiers are almost universally cult shit--and, once more, guns are the great equalizer here. Historically, when they put kids on the battlefield it was in specific positions to keep them OFF the front line; pages, runners, powder monkeys. Children are physically not useful enough to put on the battlefield on purpose. The only kids who would be willingly sacrificed like that are slave children, but the frontline kids in Warring States are supposed to be nobility? Bullshit. That's a stupid fake conflict and it annoys the hell out of me.
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agoddamn · 2 years
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Completely agree with your Sakura was done dirty posts, such wasted potential. Hope you don't mind me asking, but is there any other things you wish you could have seen with the other main girls? Either in story development or in a 'jiujitsu Sakura' way?
Springboarding off Sakura (because I have been thinking about this for nearly twenty years), I think that after her Ino fight in the chuunin exams she could have really used a Konohamaru-type kid apprentice to help her character continue growing.
With Sakura's self-consciousness, it seems pretty legit to me that she'd have a much easier time telling someone else "you don't have to hide yourself!" rather than telling herself "I don't have to hide myself!" It would also jive well with some of her other narrative issues by rounding out her miniature supporting cast and giving her compassion a way to be expressed other than the Sasuke obsession.
I don't think there's anything inherently wrong with making a female character a nurturing, kind person, but you need to actually do that and not just go "well she's in love with a man, which is what women are supposed to do." In Naruto as it is, it feels more like it was written as "she's kind in service to her role of loving Sasuke."
I'd also like Tenten to do fucking anything. In a fistfighting manga, being a weapon specialist actually nerfs you...
Hell, you could even kill two birds with one stone and have Tenten suffer some major personal upheaval and have her be the person Sakura counsels/bonds with. You lose the mentoring angle, but the cast stays trim and the whole younger-guiding-older inversion is cute. As much as I don't want to relegate her to being Sakura's pet project, "cool girl loses faith in herself and then gets her groove back" is a fine plot and most importantly it would actually give her something to do.
Hinata...ah, I've been in the Women in Refrigerators trenches from the beginning but she probably should have died. I've heard a rumor that she was planned to die and Kishimoto changed the casualty to Neji when he decided to make NaruHina endgame. Not sure how true it is, but the story does feel like it was setting up for that. Neji narratively and materially had more shit to do; Hinata's debut as "shy girl with a crush who gains self-confidence" was just a softer version of Sakura's arc in the first place.
Killing Hinata would also give you more potential angles with Team Kurenai; Gai already has a fair few character hooks with Kakashi's rivalry, his self-sacrifice complex, his bond with Lee, and his taijutsu/hard work focus. Kurenai is...Asuma's waifu and then Asuma's mourner/baby momma lol genjutsu is criminally underused in Naruto in the first place thanks to the Sharingan existing; Kurenai needs something to fucking do.
Killing Hinata seems harsh, but tearing Team 8 apart rather than Team Gai lets you put Kurenai in the coveted "everyone I love dies" angst spotlight. You could even shake things up and have her seek out a connection with Neji as she mourns Hinata; what did Kurenai think about the whole Hyuuga family thing, anyway? Would Neji feel like a cheap replacement? Or would he recognize an honest connection? (And he's not a girl, but Shino is probably the most ignored male Konoha genin. He'd benefit from more chances for characterization, too. Always liked him.)
Ino should have been the default InoShikaCho leader over Shikamaru. She just seems a lot better with people, you know? I also always wanted to see more about her family's involvement with the Torture & Interrogation department--how the hell does that get glazed over? Her mindwalk art has some insanely dark potential. Maybe her relationship with Sakura in Shippuden gains some tension back after they reconciled at the chuunin exams because Sakura starts seeing more darkness in her as she's trained to follow in her father's footsteps?
If anyone in the main cast is gonna buy into Danzo's authoritarian rule to any degree, it's gonna be the fucking Torture & Interrogation department. I don't know that she should fully side with him (though if Sasuke gets to declare war on the village and still get welcomed back the girls should also get to do war crimes a little, as a treat), but I feel like with a father in T&I she'd be most likely to agree with "the end justifies the means."
Also she should kiss Sakura.
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agoddamn · 2 years
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I KNOW that Nart history is the narrative equivalent of those cartoon long shots where the characters go full meduka that you were clearly never intended to zoom in on but like. I can't get over it
Like ok even with the most uncharitable interpretations of the Senju bros...I just can't buy the idea that giving the Uchiha the police force was some kind of long con. No sane person would ever go "run the police force for me (mwahaha you'll be useless there twenty years in the future!!)" That's some 'I read the script'-level planning. Even if they were like "lol the cop job sucks" at the inception of Konoha, they would have no way whatsoever to know that things would be the same thirty years later. It's just not possible for anyone to plan for that
Furthermore THOSE two guys in particular are not that fuckin' smart. These two guys are both so dumb that they died on the front lines as heads of state! They're not meme-stupid, but they're not flawless-twenty-year-xanatos-gambit types
The fact that Madara's just like "it pushed us to the side!" without any real concrete complaint is...God, it makes him look like a quitter! I don't know any other way to put it. It makes him sound like he expected to keep accruing status without actually doing anything post-founding. He wasn't inventing infrastructure, he wasn't inventing jutsu, he wasn't building ties with other clans--why did you expect to keep accruing power, Madara?
Look, if you're in the most corrupt career known to mankind and you can't figure out a way to leverage power that's a you problem! Even the most legally hamstrung police force has incredible potential for abuse thanks to the scope of information they have access to
Like...the Uchiha are dirty enough to plan a coup, but they won't blackmail some politicians? Lean on people for protection money? C'mon! These people are supposed to be mad they don't have power but they have no apparent ambition whatsoever!
And if you take a hard look at the timeline Madara was only in the village, what, less than ten years? Maybe five in most reckonings? That's ten minutes in politics-time! Particularly pre-internet politics-time! He looks so fucking silly!
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agoddamn · 1 year
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I don't know why I can't stop thinking about the Makiivka thing. Seeing some people react to it with "but it's unfair for a whole squad to get killed just because one guy went off the rails and attempted murder!" is just. Fucking me up. Yes, war is unfair. Yes, there is no way to have a 'nice war.' Welcome to the conversation we've been having for the last 60 years or so.
What in Christ's fucking name do these people think war is? War is all getting killed for some stupid shit somebody else did! By its most basic definition! Those Russian kids haven't personally committed the atrocities Putin did and they don't deserve to die for it, but that's what Putin chose to happen to them by ordering invasion. That's the tragedy of war. That's why it's fucking sad. It's unfair from the very soul. That's what war is.
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agoddamn · 2 years
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If you hardcore wanted to theorize Nart warfare:
I think the bijuu (so, modern Nart) map well to the nuclear era. Bijuu have power that normal humans can't match, therefore nukes. It works. This era is characterized by less "direct" war but also more "low-level" war... it's so dangerous for a country to actually use a nuke these days, because every other county will go "holy fuck that guy used a nuke we need to take him out before he turns the planet into a desert"
The way to flex in this era is actually...by accumulating more nukes than anyone else. The philosophy goes: if you have lots of nukes, your nuke stash can't be destroyed in one fell swoop. The most intimidating guy on the board is therefore the one with the most nukes, because he can retaliate faster than you can destroy all his stashes.
Ironically this maps poorly to Naruto itself in a mechanical sense because Naruto has Plot Powers dictating the kyuubi and Naruto as the strongest for Main Character reasons. But, y'know, if you're looking for an actually logical take on the whole thing
Warring States era is obviously characterized by good old-fashioned pseudo-medieval throwing a bunch of guys at each other. A distinct lack of huge-scale jutsu. Let's say, maybe, Napoleonic War? Or Charlemagne era? Hashirama with the mokuton was essentially the same as the gatling gun in WW1
That leaves the first/second shinobi world wars to be analogous to...regardless of the metaphor I just used, WW1. WW1 was characterized by technological leaps and a bloodbath of trying to adapt to it. It makes sense for ninja villages recently post-unification to have a bunch of sudden technological jumps
The third shinobi world war is...actually that also seems analogous to WW1, cause-wise.
WW2 is largely characterized by its atrocities and its technological revolutions (Navajo code talking, atomic bombs, fake tank spyfare) and I don't think it maps very well to any of the Nart wars, actually. Well, that's partly because we know so vanishingly little about the shinobi world wars...
We did have both Kannabi Bridge and Minato driving off a thousand guys, which suggests a shift to the modern system of warfare where technological superiority rather than human numbers are what determines victory. Mobility is the key to the modern system, and that's pretty much Minato's jam.
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