#and before i reread this i was definitly blowing one of my problems with it way out of proportion
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ok my whole body contorted into itself every time i read a corny/awkward line or when i looked at any of the backgrounds, but that wasn't half bad actually.
#art improved slowly each page which is good but now some of the beginning is very hard to look at (& couple of panels later on too)#maybe i should of made the last attack more than one#doesn't look powerful enough#feels maybe a little cheap#but surprisingly there wasn't much with the writing i could fault as of right now#a few panelling issues but i already knew of them before#and before i reread this i was definitly blowing one of my problems with it way out of proportion#i don't dislike corny lines btw i just know corny lines can be hit or miss
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