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journey-to-the-attic · 8 months

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patch notes 1-4

( '!' and '!!' indicate larger changes that you might be more inclined to go back to read - '!' is more little additions, '!!'' is more substantial changes to existing content/larger additions)

(chapters are also linked for ease of access)

overall: -dialogue edited to be more natural/in-character - long paragraphs broken up so they're easier to read - ik's internal monologue made more consistent with her characterisation - several chapters titles changed to either be funnier, more concise, better in general, or some combination of the three

ch one: - removed/changed some of the more dated references/jokes (left in the 'who the fuck are you' joke though) - cut some of ik's conversation with mammon about religion towards the end of the chapter

ch two: - made asmo helping ik with her uniform a bit more concise of a scene (also added a little exchange towards the end of the scene that i think is cute :) )

ch three: - !! a lot of levi's tsl info-dump has been changed, and he and ik have some more dialogue with each other separate from just the info-dumping - ! lucifer and ik have a new little interaction when he wakes her from a nap in the latter half of the chapter

ch four: - satan calls ik 'imp-sized' instead of just 'tiny' in their conversation in the first half - corrected solomon and a demon in the class accidentally misgendering professor elderflower - ik does some more thinking before texting solomon to ask about the apparent tax evasion

#'' indicates changes that are big enough to be worth going back to read! (in my opinion anyway)#also something really annoying is that wattpad's text alignment is Not consistent #like i'll change it to match the way it's done in the og ao3 #and when i save/post it. it mostly just all gets aligned left again????#as a result the text conversations don't read the way they're supposed to and it sucks ngl #no idea how to fix it either #i feel like i've forgotten some stuff but ah well #patch notes #obey me

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