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greekstar · 1 year

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Ok so I’ve been thinking while I’ve been out.

What if Crowpaw/feather fell in love with Squirrelpaw/flight instead of Feathertail on the journey? It would all make sense, duo to them being both around the same age and they have the same type of attitude.

Brambleclaw and Ashfur would still love her, but instead of Ashfur being evil, it’s Brambleclaw. Ashfur quickly realized she isn’t interested and moves on. Later getting with Whitewing. But Brambleclaw would be so obsessed with Squirrelflight, he gets the idea of getting power to get to her. Starting to plot against Thunderclan and Windclan with Hawkfrost and Mudclaw, so where Mudclaw who becomes leader so he can help defeat FireStar. Making his death an accident when there is a border fight and Mud’star’ and his deputy would accidentally kill FireStar. Who at the time had Brambleclaw as the deputy as he waited for Graystripe to return. Though it fails when Mudclaw is killed by Onewhisker in a one-on-one fight. And the storm rages so Brambleclaw has to retreat into the shadows. Not being seen by the Thunderclan patrol who later comes and helps defeat the rebels. So Brambleclaw is still ‘loyal’ in Thunderclan’s eyes.

Crowfeather- Now talon cause he doesn’t love Feather anymore) and Squirrelflight are still meeting at the border. More near the Moonpool and out of clan territory so no cats catches them. They often meet when their not busy and know when there is less suspicious activity.

Brambleclaw is furious and plots with Hawkfrost to take something of Squirrelflight and make him leader. Which is making FireStar follow him into the fox-trap. It some-what works and takes one life but not until Ashfur catches Hawkfrost and almost kills him. The Dark brown tabby and white tom runs back to Riverclan, stating to Leopardstar that Thunderclan ambushed him while he was going to get herbs for his sister. Which was a lie, but Mothflight wasn’t there to do anything as she was looking for herbs herself.

Riverclan plans on attacking Thunderclan and Brambleclaw tries and help. Right now, Brackenfur is deputy after Cinderpelt gets a prophecy stating that Bramble would be a reconning, which Brambleclaw is inraged that he was demotes and later finds out Squirrel has been mating with Crow and manipulates Squirrelflight into becoming his mate to hide the fact that she’s with the Windclan warrior. When Riverclan attacked Brambleclaw took Squirrelflight out of camp for a walk. Taking her to the abandoned two-leg place to hunt. When they return, the camp is destroyed. The newly built camp that they just settled into now in shambles. All the dens were torn apart. Cinderpelt was wounded and the herb store was destroyed and Birchpaw, Ashfur and Sootfur were severely injured. Only Ashfur makes it, while Birchpaw and Sootfur die. Whitewing becomes a warrior right after. (Whitewing and Ashfur end up having Dovewing and Ivypool and later end up having another kit and name is Brindlekit after Ashfur’s mother.)

Squirrelflight is devastated by this death and so is Spiderleg, Dustpelt and Ferncloud. Spiderleg, losing his last sibling, and Ferncloud and Dustpelt losing the last kit to their second litter.

Crowtalon sees that Brambleclaw is abusing his mate and comes to FireStar in secret after asking to meet with him. Crowtalon decides to tell FireStar how much he loves his daughter and asks to rightfully join Thunderclan to be with her, and Firestar having deep connects with Windclan, accepts him into Thunderclan. Crowtalon has a hard time adjusting to clan life but slowly gets used to it. Brambleclaw is furious with this as he now has to step back from being Squirrelflight’s ‘mate’ which was going to give him power. Firestar ends up seeing this and exiles Brambleclaw who ends up running to Riverclan. Where Hawkfrost convinces Leopardstar to let him join. Leopardstar agreed as she sees it as ‘Brambleclaw just wanting to be with his brother’ and when Firestar explains Brambleclaw was exiled. Leopardstar makes an excuse saying ‘Your just saying that because you lost a very good warrior’ where Firestar growls and leaves the gathering.

After this, Mistyfoot is tells Leopardstar that Firestar is right, where Leopardstar is inraged that her deputy would trust another leader and not her and demotes and exiles her and her kits, Primrosethorn and Reedwhisker. And which they join Thunderclan while Leopardstar makes Hawkfrost deputy. Who later becomes Hawkstar and makes Brambleclaw his deptuy. (Starclan gives Hawkstar his lives because they see him as a good leader who would make Riverclan strong. Which is kinda how it went with Tigerstar I)

Firestar is mad that Leopardstar has made Hawkfrost deputy but pushes forward. Allowing BlueStar’s daughter back in Thunderclan. Who decides to stay for good. While Primrose quickly gets comfortable. Clearly having Thunderclan blood while Reedwhisker has a slow process in getting used to the inclosed woods with barely any water. Though Firestar allows them to fish in the lake on Thunderclan’s territory. Primrosethorn later takes Rainwhisker as a mate.

Squirrelflight and Crowtalon have their first litter around the time Leafpool has hers with Mothflight.

They have their litter outside of camp so they can take in Leafpool’s. Who has two. She had Jaykit(named after his blue eyes) and Lionkit who was named after his golden-brown fur. While Squirrelflight has Fallowkit named after a bird like Crowtalon. Jayfeather, LionBlaze, Fallowleaf. (Hollyleaf)

-I named Holly something different cause Leaf has originally named her Holly cause that was the first patient she lost but now she isn’t Her kit so it makes sense for Squirrelflight to name her something different.

This explains why Fallowleaf doesn’t get powers. When Brambleclaw (who replaces Ashfur in the fire scene) rats out Squirrelflight saying she is a traitor for having kits with another clan cat even though Crowtalon joined the clan and says her kits should be dead’s. So Squirrelflight says their not hers though Brambleclaw still attacks her, injuring her before Squirrelflight pushes him into the fire. Making him burned for life and gets imprisoned in Thunderclan by Firestar due to Squirrelflight telling Firestar he tried to kill her and her kits.

Now, when Fallowleaf heard this she thought she wasn’t her kit either. Which is why at first she hates Squirrelflight and ignores her. But Crowfeather tells her that she is their kit, but not her brothers. So Fallowleaf doesn’t run into the tunnels, though does get trapped in them after hunting and falling into one. Which is where she meets and gets trained by Fallen Leaves to live in the tunnels.

Fallowleaf lives and I’m tempted to make her have a mate. Idk who though.

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Thats all I got for now. If you have questions please ask. I know this was a bit sloppy but it was all on the top of my head for 2 days now.

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cryptidclaw · 1 year

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Question for curiosity: Have you decided on Mistyfoot and her mate situation?

Honestly Blackclaw or Leopardstar as her mate is just riddled with angst on both sides.

Blackclaw abandoning her and their kits due to be being half order and watching it all happen and later roping against her.

Leopardstar being right and center to all of it. The reason Mistyfoot and her family are in the situation in the first place, is because her mate decided to join Tigerstar.

Their kits up for the slaughter.

Imagine how much more painful it’d be for Mistyfoot watching her former mate raising Tigerstar’s kits.

It’s also hilarious how Leopardstar loses both her wives (Mistyfoot and Sasha). Though it wouldn’t surprise me if Leopardstar was seeing Sasha on the side and Mistyfoot just not saying anything when she finds out and Sasha is brought into the order.

Also, Have you decided on if Primrosepaw and Pikepaw could live? or Reedwhisker since I didn’t see him in your River order post.

They’d definitely have some kind of injuries. All of the cats held in the prison should have some kind of injury or heavy scarring because you can’t tell me they were only shoved in a den.

Like, blind in one or both eyes or twisted legs.

ok wait, the Leopardstar idea is actually so good and angsty! I love it!

I think Blackclaw can be Misty and Leopard's donor, so double angst bec moth Leopard and Blackclaw basically abandon her and her kits after she is found out to be half Order!

I think in RoC Leopard is very obsessed with how the Order sees her and how she is respected, so she is constantly acting in ways that will get her respect and help her raise in the ranks.

Leopard saw that Misty was beautiful and a great warrior, very respected in the Order and because of this Leopard fell in love how great and powerful they could be together. They had their kits with Blackclaw as a donor because Leopard definitely wanted her kits to be pure Order even if donors from outside the Orders were allowed, and she wanted a strong, powerful and well respected tom as the donor!

When Leopard found out that Misty was half Order she was horrified, she was mates with a half Order cat! she immediately left Misty and pretty much abandoned her kits because she was terrified of what the Order would think of her, and she knew she would loose power and respect if she stayed by their side.

I think Leopard just went down hill from there, maybe she was even more motivated to join with Tiger because she wanted to prove that she was allied with his anti- half Order ideals. She also wants to prove that she can make River Order even more powerful!

She still secretly gets with Sasha because she doesnt actually hate outsiders as much as she hated how the her reputation could be ruined by being close to them.

I think after Tiger is kicked out, Leopard sees that River Order is quickly becoming very against the Orders' xenophobia due to them being horrified by what happened to their Order due to it, so Leopard decides to make Misty her deputy to be like "look! Im not like Tigerstar! Plz forgive me". She also randomly lets her new loner/ ex-kittypet wife into the clan bec she feels like that could possibly work in her favor at this point, plus she can get away with it now bec she's leader.

I also like the idea of Misty's other kits surviving, or at least more than in canon? I honestly just got confused an couldn't figure out when Misty's kits were born so I didnt at them to the allegiances lol. I like the idea of Primrosepaw surviving though! I really like her name! Plus maybe she can carry on the Misty bloodline! hmmm what would her name be... Primrosethorn could actually be pretty cool...

alsoo the idea that the cats in prison at the time where left with injuries is sooo good.... I will ponder thissss, I might give Feathertail and Stormfur something like that too!

#cryptid answers #cryptidclaw's warriors au #rise of change

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