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ouabhs Ā· 5 months
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missing evajacks a lot.. itā€™s already been more than a month ā˜¹ļø
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ouabhs Ā· 6 months
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acftl review (finally)
I give it a 3 ā­ļø (as much as it pains me) even then itā€™s only this high bc I love evajacks so much
so I was finally able to gather my thoughts into one post and while there were many things I enjoyed a few others didnā€™t sit right..
1. the whole story curse thing.. it makes sense that the story curse would twist things which is why some things were left unexplained but it doesnā€™t feel like it was done deliberately?? it just felt like stephanie genuinely didnā€™t know how to tie some things together.. like sure not every single thing needs an explanation but she emphasised certain things wayyy too much in the first two books for them to be completely ignored for example evajacks talking to each other in their minds. Even the broken heart scar wasnā€™t addressed again after like halfway through acftl
2. too much apollo.. sorry this is not even just me being biased or whatever like I do agree his pov helped explain the plot from a different perspective but he got wayyy more of a backstory and a conclusion to his character than jacks for a someone that wasnā€™t as present in the last 2 books.. and this was supposed to be jacksā€™ series kinda (ik it was evangelines too) but I feel like jacks got sidelined hard and thatā€™s disappointing. It also didnā€™t help that whenever there was an intense scene between evajacks the pov would switch to apollo.. to be fair I think having 3 povs was just hard to execute in general
3. the kiss scene.. usually it would not be a big deal but itā€™s a big part of jacks character that he canā€™t kiss girls without killing them idk I thought him finally getting to kiss evangeline would be a lot moreā€¦ grand? they barely got a page or any detail and then the next chapter was ā€œonce upon a time there was kissing and more kissing šŸ„°šŸ„°ā€ which was even more underwhelming. Even apollo and evangelines kiss scenes were longer and more detailed and they got multiple
4. the overall vibe of the 3rd book felt very different to the first two I couldnā€™t put my finger on it at first but I feel like it had something to do with the writing.. at some parts it felt familiar (like all the descriptions and the fairytale aspects) but others it just felt different?
5. during too many scenes it just felt like stephanie was rewriting tbona.. like I havenā€™t really seen anyone say this yet but a good chunk of the book was quotes from tbona which I feel took up a lot of unnecessary space and couldā€™ve been used to develop other plots or characters? Literally someone that hasnā€™t read tbona could get a gist of what happened cause itā€™s all summarised in there šŸ˜­
6. the plot in general.. contrary to popular belief I donā€™t think this was that romance focused (as people claim as to why things werenā€™t explained) because I think stephanie incorporated more plot in here but it was just different to what we saw in the last books because previous characters (luc, marisol, tiberius, kristof) werenā€™t as present in this book and new characters plots and explanations were just thrown in.. not much felt connected
7. jacksā€™ backstory.. (going back to my second point) how he became a fate was really glossed over I feel and was only briefly mentioned but I just wanted more.. I do like the fact that he said he did it for chaos and I wish their friendship was delved into more because he literally turned to immortality because his friend would be alone. What about his parents? His friendship with Lyric? The merrywood three in general? His life when he was trapped in the card?
8. the first fox.. again wayy too significant to be missed out especially since jacks doesnā€™t really remember whether or not he had a thing for her and chaos said evangeline was similar to her.. how was there no link?
I definitely have more to add but for now my main takeaway is that while tbona was very hard to top I feel like acftl couldā€™ve been so much more especially since it was set up so well.. I think so many people are disappointed because it doesnā€™t hold up as well for the last book in a series but Iā€™m just glad evajacks got their happy ending šŸ« 
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ouabhs Ā· 6 months
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really curious about stephanies original draft for the ouabh series
from what I hear:
- jacks wouldā€™ve been drugged by julian and taken away
- to get him back evangeline wouldā€™ve had to make a deal with chaos
- chaos said if he helps her then he gets to bite her
- evangeline was supposed to be a spy hired by scarlett and sent to the north to kill jacks
- the love triangle was supposed to be between chaos, eva and jacks
- as for acftl stephanies editor told her it was too dark for a YA book so she rewrote a big chunk of it (mostly the ending)
- jacks wasnā€™t gonna have a pov at all it was meant to be just eva and apollo (thank god bc imagine no jacks at all??)
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ouabhs Ā· 6 months
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is this a good time to say I would definitely read a book about chaos and lala? šŸ¤— (stephanie was obvs hinting at it their scene was soo funny)
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ouabhs Ā· 6 months
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favourite acftl quotes (spoilers ahead)
- ā€œShe was the moth and jacks was still the flame.ā€
- ā€œHe considered setting the room ablaze just so that heā€™d have a reason to pick her up and carry her out, to save her one last time, before he left her for good.ā€
- ā€œI know my attempt to save Jacks could end in a fiery explosion, but Iā€™d rather go up in flames with him than watch while he burns.ā€
- ā€œHe knew it was a bad idea, but he wanted her to remember him. He wanted her to look at him, just once, and know him the way she had before.ā€
- ā€œI am a monster, but whether you remember it or not, Iā€™m your monster, Evangeline.ā€
- ā€œBeing yours does not make you mine.ā€
- ā€œIā€™ve seen you try before. Iā€™ve seen you want something more than anything else in the entire world. Iā€™ve seen what youā€™re willing to do.ā€
- ā€œYou told me it would take the life of the person I love the most.ā€ ā€¦ā€œIt is, itā€™s taking you.ā€
- Evangelineā€™s whole love confession
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ouabhs Ā· 6 months
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these are actually so stunning!! might be some of my new favorite artworks, the details are insane and also so beautiful <3
artist @giannyfili on instagram!!
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ouabhs Ā· 6 months
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more opinions on acftl
spoilers ahead****
I also wanted to add that the people saying jacks wasnā€™t himself were the same ones who claim his confession wasnā€™t enough.. heā€™s always been an actions over words guy and I can definitely say the whole book was his confession. The grand gestures he does from going back in time to save evas life in tbona to taking out his heart in exchange for a cuff thatā€™ll always protect her even from himself is a huge way of proving he loves her (on top of the many times heā€™s saved her life). Evaā€™s confession was also beautiful it made sense that it was longer and more heartfelt because sheā€™s more of a words type of person and jacks needed to hear it that someone loved him.. eva already knows jacks loved her. Iā€™d even go on to say that a longer confession from jacks wouldā€™ve been more ooc but again thatā€™s just my opinion I enjoy reading everyoneā€™s thoughts on acftl šŸ«¶šŸ½
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ouabhs Ā· 6 months
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this getting 1,000 notesā€¦ jacks you are so famous and loved (and itā€™s his bday today) šŸ„³šŸ„³
jacks never had a bad track. ā€œGlad to know youā€™re thinking about me when you kiss your husband.ā€ BANGER. ā€œBut for tonight, let me pretend youā€™re mine.ā€ ICONIC. ā€œIā€™d probably kill another man if I found him with you like thisā€ LIFE CHANGING. ā€œThere is nothing of equal value to meā€. UNMATCHED.
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ouabhs Ā· 6 months
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acftl spoilers ahead***
letā€™s revisit so:
- jacks had evangeline bent over a bridge and dangling within an inch of her life
- threw clothes at her face while giving her instructions IN HER OWN ROOM
- knocked aurora out because she wouldnā€™t give him his heart back when he asked
- threatens and kills the assassin who tried to kill evangeline
- beats apollo to the point he seems half dead
- had a 2 v 1 sparring with the valor brothers because they didnā€™t have evangelines best interest at heart (this was funny bc he didnā€™t even care that he was losing)
- stabbed chaos for talking to evangeline (his bff of many years btw)
- gave evangeline a dead fox as a warning not to look for him with a letter that said ā€œa little fox for my little foxā€ (isnā€™t he soo dreamy šŸ˜)
this is who people are calling out of character btw he was still very much unhinged
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ouabhs Ā· 6 months
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acftl spoilers (I think)
I can tell people wanted a legendary jacks comeback with all these ā€œjacks was oocā€ ā€œjacks was not himself in acftlā€ allegations.. sometimes you have to look at the context of the book. In legendary he had no proper love interest and nothing to lose really so ofc he was going around being a menace.. after tbona the love of his life literally died in his arms and forgot him it would be odd if he DID remain the exact same donā€™t you think? He didnā€™t even change that dramatically he was still his sassy self just more vulnerable and allowed himself to feel more (ahem I believe this is called character development)
anyways acftl had its problems but jacks being ooc was def not one of them in my honest opinion šŸ¤—
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ouabhs Ā· 6 months
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the jacks pov is so sexy what the hell
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ouabhs Ā· 6 months
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just finished acftl and I have soo many thoughts.. just trying to organise them into one place because I have a lot to say
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ouabhs Ā· 7 months
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Iā€™m so tempted to spoil myself for acftl like these last ten days have gone by excruciatingly slow and we still have another WEEKā€¦ the fomo is real cause so many people have finished the book already and Iā€™m sooo curious
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ouabhs Ā· 7 months
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one thing I will say is I donā€™t like how hard stephanie is pushing the love triangle.. I knew it was gonna be there but sheā€™s making it look like apollo has a chance (we know he doesnā€™t) but oh well.. he barely did anything in the past 2 books and the thirds focus is all on him idk šŸ˜­
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ouabhs Ā· 7 months
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she likes apollo more than jacksā€¦ who else is scared šŸ™‹ā€ā™€ļø
also evangeline as a spy omg I wouldā€™ve never imagined
So these are just notes and random things I wrote down from Stephanie Garber's London tour:
ā— Her favourite character used to be Jacks but now it's Apollo *gasp from the audience*
ā— She wrote Finale chapter 16 ( the one where it mentioned that a wedding party was turned to stone and the bride's sister took their place) before she wrote Once Upon A Broken Heart, which actually contradicts what everyone believes- that she wrote chapter 16 to set up ouabh.
ā— In the first draft of ouabh, Evangeline was a spy sent from Valenda to the North to kill Jacks.
ā— She's written her next book (secret project #7) and it's probably going to be announced around a month after acftl is released.
ā— When asked if Chaos, Lala and the Valors are going to return she said yes and that there is going to be a Chaos/Lala scene (a scene where Evangeline is like "hey I'm still here guys") (Stephanie's words)
ā— She said she also has a Chaos/Lala story in her head but I think there was something about Secret project #7 having nothing to do with the ouabh/caraval universe but don't quote me on that.
ā— Jacks was hard to write in acftl
ā— Also mentioned that Legend was easy to write until Finale
ā— When asked about alternate endings she said she:
> she doesn't like writing bonus material
> she feels like she puts everything she wants to in the book
> they are not canon
> there is one light ending, one dark ending and one that's in the middle (out of all the bonus epilogues/alternate endings)
> she prefers the dark ending and doesn't really like the light ending
ā— There actually is something about Jacks liking apples and sometimes the colours were intentional
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ouabhs Ā· 7 months
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so many people are getting their acftl copies early but thankfully Iā€™ve seen no spoilers yet
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ouabhs Ā· 7 months
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jacks confessing first and eva initiating their first kiss in acftl >>>>
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