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jemonlimon08 · 3 years

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Can someone please ask me??

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jemonlimon08 · 3 years

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Crewmate: Who killed Red

Me: *was cuddling a lot of Jeanluc drawings and fanfics* It wasn't me

Crewmate: Could someone vote this girl out?

#jean x diluc #I love jean and diluc

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jemonlimon08 · 3 years

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Hi there!

pSorry for being gone for such a long time, I really hope that you miss me!

#im back #maybe one day #i maybe not post that much because loss of motivation for art

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jemonlimon08 · 3 years

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It's been a while,

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jemonlimon08 · 4 years

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I gonna have to postpone the drawing requests (I'm sorry) cuz I had to regain my motivation for drawing. But don't worry, I'll be posting but not that much!

Have a great day, folks

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jemonlimon08 · 4 years

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Keiji, Sou, and Alice are my favorite OT3 uwu

#alice yabusame #keiji shinogi #sou hiyori #shin tsukimi #i prefer to say sou or shin sowwy #keialice #kimi ga shine #keisou #yttd #keisoualice #keishinalice #uwu

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jemonlimon08 · 4 years

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Sorry about the inactivity

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jemonlimon08 · 4 years

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Sorry for being gone for a while and I had nothing to do, so here's a gacha edit that I'm so proud of uwu

#yttd #your turn to die #kimi ga shine #joe tazuna #sara chidouin #joesara #gacha edit #cuz why not

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jemonlimon08 · 4 years

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Sorry for being inactive here ^^

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jemonlimon08 · 4 years

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Just doing nothing today but drawing-

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jemonlimon08 · 4 years

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Hey guys and I got something to say.

Someone (possibly a bot) (and this is the second time) wanna woo me for their "fun" and I got pissed off and I said no to them. Whatever you saw this person, just report them and fucking block them.

#bot #i hate them

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jemonlimon08 · 4 years

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Keisoualice, Keisoualice-

#kgs #your turn to die #keiji shinogi #sou hiyori #shin tsukimi #alice yabusame #keisoualice #soualice #shinalice #keisou #alikei #keialice #keishin #3 bois being 3 bois #sou is baby

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jemonlimon08 · 4 years

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Words to replace said, except this actually helps

I got pretty fed up with looking for words to replace said because they weren’t sorted in a way I could easily use/find them for the right time. So I did some myself.

IN RESPONSE TO Acknowledged Answered Protested

INPUT/JOIN CONVERSATION/ASK Added Implored Inquired Insisted Proposed Queried Questioned Recommended Testified

GUILTY/RELUCTANCE/SORRY Admitted Apologized Conceded Confessed Professed

FOR SOMEONE ELSE Advised Criticized Suggested

JUST CHECKING Affirmed Agreed Alleged Confirmed

LOUD Announced Chanted Crowed

LEWD/CUTE/SECRET SPY FEEL Appealed Disclosed Moaned

ANGRY FUCK OFF MATE WANNA FIGHT Argued Barked Challenged Cursed Fumed Growled Hissed Roared Swore

SMARTASS Articulated Asserted Assured Avowed Claimed Commanded Cross-examined Demanded Digressed Directed Foretold Instructed Interrupted Predicted Proclaimed Quoted Theorized

ASSHOLE Bellowed Boasted Bragged

NERVOUS TRAINWRECK Babbled Bawled Mumbled Sputtered Stammered Stuttered

SUAVE MOTHERFUCKER Bargained Divulged Disclosed Exhorted

FIRST OFF Began

LASTLY Concluded Concurred

WEAK PUSY Begged Blurted Complained Cried Faltered Fretted

HAPPY/LOL Cajoled Exclaimed Gushed Jested Joked Laughed

WEIRDLY HAPPY/EXCITED Extolled Jabbered Raved

BRUH, CHILL Cautioned Warned

ACTUALLY, YOU’RE WRONG Chided Contended Corrected Countered Debated Elaborated Objected Ranted Retorted

CHILL SAVAGE Commented Continued Observed Surmised

LISTEN BUDDY Enunciated Explained Elaborated Hinted Implied Lectured Reiterated Recited Reminded Stressed

BRUH I NEED U AND U NEED ME Confided Offered Urged

FINE Consented Decided

TOO EMO FULL OF EMOTIONS Croaked Lamented Pledged Sobbed Sympathized Wailed Whimpered

JUST SAYING Declared Decreed Mentioned Noted Pointed out Postulated Speculated Stated Told Vouched

WASN’T ME Denied Lied

EVIL SMARTASS Dictated Equivocated Ordered Reprimanded Threatened

BORED Droned Sighed

SHHHH IT’S QUIET TIME Echoed Mumbled Murmured Muttered Uttered Whispered

DRAMA QUEEN Exaggerated Panted Pleaded Prayed Preached

OH SHIT Gasped Marveled Screamed Screeched Shouted Shrieked Yelped Yelled

ANNOYED Grumbled Grunted Jeered Quipped Scolded Snapped Snarled Sneered

ANNOYING Nagged

I DON’T REALLY CARE BUT WHATEVER Guessed Ventured

I’M DRUNK OR JUST BEING WEIRDLY EXPRESSIVE FOR A POINT/SARCASM Hooted Howled Yowled

I WONDER Pondered Voiced Wondered

OH, YEAH, WHOOPS Recalled Recited Remembered

SURPRISE BITCH Revealed

IT SEEMS FAKE BUT OKAY/HA ACTUALLY FUNNY BUT I DON’T WANT TO LAUGH OUT LOUD Scoffed Snickered Snorted

BITCHY Tattled Taunted Teased

Edit: People, I’m an English and creative writing double major in college; I understand that there’s nothing wrong with simply using “said.” This was just for fun, and it comes in handy when I need to add pizzazz.

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jemonlimon08 · 4 years

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writing dialogue

The dialogue in your story is crucial to several factors that ultimately define the tale, including but not limited to character development, plot advancement, and description. It is one of the three main components of writing and should most definitely be kept in mind when proceeding with your tasks. Below, I’ve written some things to keep in mind when you are allowing your characters to converse and strategies that can help with accomplishing those goals.

1) Conversations should be natural and consistent: Nothing should sound like something your character wouldn’t say. For example, if your protagonist is meant to be serious and dark, they shouldn’t be saying ‘OMG, L8S ALIG8ERS, SEE Y'ALL RIGHT AFTER I FINISH MY HOURLY STARBUCKS RUN AFTER PILATES AT THREE. LUV YA AAAHHHHH!’ every three seconds. Yes, characters are complex and have unique moments depending on the circumstance, but even with that, they must remain consistent. Another note regarding this is that if your character does not sound natural or human, something must be altered.

2) Characters should have their own voices: If they all begin to sound monotone and the same, your story likely is as well. Everyone has a different thinking/speaking process, and that should accompany them throughout the tale. (I mean, life isn’t one character, is it? Imagine how horrid it would be if we were all just one)

3) Avoid small talk: You should definitely keep in some moments that show your characters are still human but if it isn’t necessary towards understanding/advancing the plot or characters, get rid of it. No one wants to hear about Carter’s new bedsheets, regardless of what snazzy patterns they have.

4) DIalogue is important, but it isn’t the whole story: Let actions show what happens rather than your character talking it all out. Better yet, mix them (narration + dialogue) for the best effect.

5) Don’t always use names: It isn’t natural. Only do this when capturing another character’s attention or to make a point.

6) Using said is okay: We don’t always scream, fume, pout, or sob. Sometimes, we just say, and that is completely okay! (More natural too) If not, however, here’s a post that can help.

7) Stutter Realistically: “I-I d-d-don’t e-ev-ever st-stutter l-like th-this-is. Instead, this is how I - how I stutter.”

8) Remember your dialogue tags: If you cannot tell who is speaking, it’s time to plug one of them in. It doesn’t hurt to add a 'Sarah said’ from time to time so go ahead and do it! Maybe you know what you’re talking about inside of your mind, but your audience doesn’t.

9) Don’t talk too much: Sometimes, actions are stronger than words. If instinct calls for it, do it.

10) Proper punctuation: This is very important for readers, publishers, yourself, everybody. Here’s a quick guide that can help.

If you are struggling with any of these, the best way for a fix is to just read your writing out loud. From there, pick out lines and phrases, highlight them, and go off. Make changes as you recall previous interactions in your head and keep working on fitting it into the description and narration. Watch out for the things above and repeat this for as long as you need - in my experience, it usually makes for a pretty good session. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to ask and as always, I hope that this could help. Cheers!

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jemonlimon08 · 4 years

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“ Use these as replacements for the word ‘said’! ” He exclaimed.

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jemonlimon08 · 4 years

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I wonder, where's everybody at thou

#random

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jemonlimon08 · 4 years

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I wanna say hi to you all uwu

I'm back from this.....art block of mines ^^"

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