Hi, I've been reading your comic. And I think you should use keyboard to write and be little modern like make connection with season 4 not go back to season 2. maybe It'll attract more audiunce. You know make it more like a comic. but other than that, I love it. Remember:this is my opinion you could make it how ever you want 😉
Like:
@journeytomonkiekid ( #1 best and proper comic)
@lumidotexe (comic)
@theghostshost (Horror, It has a little bit comic)
Like that. (👆check out please👆)
So I'm gonna treat this like a proper critique and respond like what I was trained to do;
It becomes no longer an opinion when the intention of this message is to start all over and do whatever x comic is doing. And the reason is...to get more of an audience?
Comics and art are unique to that artists own interpretation, the three examples you showed demonstrate that (two romance genres with different and wonderful stories, and a AU where Wukong has to figure out how to cover for a stone MK). I'm not gonna lie, this ask kinda fucked with me while paneling chapter 3 because already it's getting seen as "not a proper comic" /neg. It's just weird how you only read two pages of the story, and then pose that the story would be better in season 4.
When in season 2 was about collecting relics to power up lady bone demon's "destiny". Because my whole message in Young Bones is kindness is a virtue.
So if anything, thanks, I'll work on my penmanship better. 🙃
(Also please check out @swagginmun for their amazing comic as well! Because swags' paneling and color language are majority my inspiration to handwrite in the first place. Wish's comic inspired much of the humor and drama with backgrounds and the tone and Lumi's comic, just, her lines in her comic everything is just so crisp and really charming as for character relationships and build up, oh and Ghosthost has that inspiration for me to add in that element of unexpectedness, the thrill the action the horror! So yea I know about them)
Have you ever thought about opening up a patrion or something where you would do tutorials and such or anything like that? :0 Or commissions? You’re my biggest inspiration and studying your work is really fun! So getting a more behind the scenes stuff would be really cool! ^^
Yes, yes, indeed commissions and patreon are happening, but it’s my first time setting up comms so I’m being careful about it. What would you guys want to see if I opened up a patreon?
Macaque smokes, he doesn't so it on a daily basis but he some hit sometimes.
Macaque is a theater rat, trust me, sing any song from any musical and he will duet that shit with you
He rides a motorcycle, ✨Period✨
He probably trains Bai he to help defend herself, I wouldn't see him adopting her because in my opinion, and I think this is also mentioned, Bai he father is a boar.
Doesn't like cold stuff touching his teeth, his teeth are sensitive(me too personally)
Macaque has a tattoo, probably on his chest do to his fur.
Yes. my apologies, It's still short😭
But, I am working on a ao3 story about my lmk oc that may take some time but bare with me😅 I may also add an AU to but well see. currently 12:09 right now