Sometimes, all I do is sit on a rock, and wait for the sun to come to my corner of the sky and then slowly disappear. I place myself under the vast sky to remember how small I am and the puzzles I try to solve. I forget what I desperately chase to remember the promises I made to my soul.
Desperation is the mask
I don when I try
To fill the limitless void inside of me
Like maybe if I love you
Beyond literal comprehension
There'll be some feeling left to spare
For the girl within
Go so deep that you disappear into me and blend with my bones.
I do like writing these short pieces called elfchen poems, a five line, 11 word poem with the word sequence pattern of 1-2-3-4-1. It is an art to be able say something meaningful using only a handful of words.
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