I do wish people drew Yellowfang with more with the rattiest, mangiest, most plaque ridden teeth and gave her just the worst smelling breath.
Like I get the joke of putting yellow on in Yellowfang's pelt cause she has yellow in her name, but doing that and simultaneously giving her pearly whites does betray what in my mind feels like the original intention of her character.
I know nowadays its hard to look at Into the Wild completely on its own without the mountains of further context and elaboration we've gotten over the years, but when you wind back the clock and look at ItW just on its own its surprising in contrast to the rest of the franchise (even to the rest of The Prophecies Begin) just how simple, direct, and even cartoonish the aesthetics of that book are.
ThunderClan are the good guys, ShadowClan are the bad guys (who have a hint of "we're not inherently evil, just currently being misguided, but also we are inherently mean and violent"), and WindClan and RiverClan are non-entities who are just window-dressing.
Between ThunderClan and ShadowClan, characters are built to follow this dichotomy super hard. The ThunderClan medicine cat Spottedleaf is a kind, gentle, caring young lady with a pretty calico pattern who is constantly (to a memetic degree) stated to smell nice and sweet. In contrast, the ShadowClan medicine cat has to be built to be her polar opposite. Yellowfang is a grouchy old lady with a jet-black pelt whos covered in scars, has this squished in face, and has a name meant to invoke the image of bad hygiene (what should be the opposite image of a healer). Shes the healer of the (for this story) designated evil side who was designed to looks the part.
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🐈 Give me the drama!
Drama, eh? How about the tragedy that is Dustpelt's mother?
Mild trigger warning for xenophobia.
I split up Robinwing's kittens amongst others. Frostfur and Chestnutwing are their only children, though she does give some help to Brindleface and Whitestorm both for a small amount of time. All Queens helped out with Brindlekit and Whitekit though. Brindlekit's mother abandoned Thunderclan after giving birth and never said who the father was, and no one claimed her. Longtail was born to Patchpelt still, but now his mother is an OC named Bluebellfur. This successfully shatters one of the problems that Robinwing, Fuzzypelt and Patchpelt caused.
As for Dustpelt, Cherrypaw and Ravenpaw? They are now the kittens that belong to Grayflower.
Grayflower is a skinny gray and cream/dilute tortoiseshell molly with purple eyes. She had her kits Honor Sired by Featherwhisker. They had NO relationship, she just wanted a Thunderclan Sire and Featherwhisker gave a thumbs up as long as she didn't involve him. He ain't a father.
She appears first during Bluestar's Prophecy as a young apprentice, trained by Fuzzypelt, and is one of the (many) cats egging on Thistlepaw. Yeah! Let's ruin those soggy fish munching freaks! Sure I'll show you a good spot where you can beat the snot out of an innocent kittypet, they're not truly cats, after all.
Yeah... if Featherwhisker knew how nasty she could be, I don't think he would have Honor Sired.
She was a TOUGH lady. Awful habits aside, nothing EVER fazed Grayflower. Ever. Cucumber trick would not have worked, kitty is unshakable.
As for her family, one would be SHOCKED to know that her parents are Tawnyspots and a brilliant cat known as Flypelt. Sadly, Flypelt passed in childbirth, leaving Tawnyspots alone with Graykit and Thrushkit. Where Thrushkit would become Thrushpelt, a proto-Fire Law supporter, his sister Grayflower would become a proto-Tiger Law supporter. A HARD Codeist.
However, oddly enough... She was a very loving mother. She held Cherrykit, Dustkit and Ravenkit close, amused when Ravenkit showed purple eyes like hers. She loved them so much, telling the three all the time how proud she was, making sure to hunt for them when she could to get their favorite prey - Robin. She even made a request to Bluestar to hold Ravenkit back for a while, her son too nervous to leave the nursery just yet.
She was the mother that would leave kind notes in your lunchbag, pack cool bandaids in her purse whenever you scraped your knee and tell you you're being so, so brave when she uses the antiseptic spray. Grayflower would make sure you eat your veggies and use your manners and help you if you needed it.
But she would then go online and rant about 'filthy' outsiders posing a threat, and cats with "outside blood" should be thrown out of the Clans, and no one could ever hope to be as holy or pure as a "Proper Thunderclan cat".
Her death comes swiftly in WCR!Into The Wild, she dies in the same battle Lionheart is killed in. Her throat is slashed by a Shadowclan cat, she's dead before she even hits the ground. Firepaw didn't like her, but when he sees how it effects her 3 kids, he understands that while she wasn't kind in any way towards him, she was still loved.
Cherryshine hides away in the warriors den, holding a small gift that Grayflower made for her, a wooden figure. Dustpaw goes from snarky and rude to just... Closed off completely. No one can get him to talk for several days. Ravenpaw clings to Graypaw and Firepaw harder for a while, having even more nightmares...
Her impact is felt harder in her death. Dustpelt had always wanted to be like her, and when he grows up he realizes just how horrific her ideals had been. Cherryshine had started to reject her ideals as an apprentice, but it never meant she didn't love her mother, never wanted to see her get better.
Ravenpaw though? Oooh, that's the juicy one.
Ravenpaw's Farewell is about grief, loss, and how people we lose can still have effect on us, even years down the line. Ravenpaw visits the graves of cats he knew regularly, the ones that haven't been paved over for an almost completely unused road. Grayflower's grave is included. He has... Some feelings about her.
When Tigerclaw had started to blame him for all the bad things happening in Thunderclan, would she have believed him? She would have died for her kids, but she would have died for Tigerstar's plans too. She believed Tigerclaw's every word... Had she loved Ravenpaw enough?
She would love who Barley is, he's funny, strong, and always up for a quick hunting session or a fun wrestle.
But she would hate what Barley is, so, so much. She hated all outsiders, especially clanless cats.
Would she hate him too?
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LONGSTAR AU MASTERPOST
~THE ART THAT STARTED IT ALL~
~THE OLD AU CHAPTERS
https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/662908930567045120/longstar-au-plotpoints?source=share
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https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/663978785520205824/longstar-au-may-the-4th-be-with-you-always-part-2?source=share
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https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/687692119432904704/brightstar-au-the-rest-of-the-skyclan-affair?source=share
~THE OLD AU ART
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https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/664690888714371072/finally-finished-with-the-thunderclan-cats-i?source=share
https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/664783420313993216/windclan-has-arrived-including-our-first-dark?source=share
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~THE NEW AU CHAPTERS
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https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/739192324336353280/longstar-au-a-dark-interlude?source=share
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https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/741364673464647680/skyclans-rescue?source=share
https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/745785428853080064/return-of-the-new-longstar-au-three-to-tango?source=share
~THE NEW AU WORLDBUILDING
https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/739152682459201536/the-offensivedefensive-roles-in-the-new-longstar?source=share
https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/739153930194386944/the-healing-and-oracular-roles-in-the-new-longstar?source=share
https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/739156737888763904/the-support-roles-and-honor-titles-for-the-new?source=share
https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/739254783841648640/the-stars-and-the-afterlife?source=share
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https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/740182320673423360/the-dishonor-titles-of-longstar-au?source=share
https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/740528703721881600/uhhhh-kittypets-maybe-didnt-like-skyclan-at-first?source=share
https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/740539839252938752/how-does-onewhisker-react-when-he-learns-about-his?source=share
https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/740540187487174656/okay-so-if-nightstar-was-a-genuine-leader-and-had?source=share
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https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/743265258256449536/im-not-sure-if-darkstripe-in-the-longstar-au-was?source=share
~THE NEW AU ART
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https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/741542478550843392/skyclans-villains?source=share
https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/741697777248157696/the-rest-of-the-skyclan-rescue-patrol-and-leafstar?source=share
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https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/742509222793723904/barley-bout-to-go-burn-down-shadowclan-held-back?source=share
https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/743050096742187008/thank-you-monochrome-sunsets-for-the-format?source=share
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https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/745794158399307776/have-some-more-background-cats-from-the-first-arc?source=share
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https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/745867189079392256/finally-can-post-the-shadowclan-designs-now-that?source=share
https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/746127626245144576/weed-and-log-from-the-last-chapter-of-the-longstar?source=share
~HOPE'S REST CLOWDER CATS (still open to adding more! They'll show up later in a fic and I will draw them!)
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https://www.tumblr.com/theanoninyourinbox/741730340641652736/can-spirit-join-the-fun-theythem-theyre-my?source=share
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btw i want there to be a running bit in shadowclan when tawnypelt comes home with feathertail's kits, everyone assumes rowanclaw is the biological father because he's tawnypelt's best friend and was very attentive to her during her pregnancy. this is strengthened when flamekit pops out looking somewhat similar to him.
this is all despite the fact that rowanclaw is a trans man.
like, at first he tries to be honest, "um no I think you're forgetting some things, I can't be the father-" and his clanmates are like "aw don't be shy man :) tawnypelt's a good lady you're very lucky". and since the kits are really halfclan, tawny and rowan decide to run with it (in the process they become an actual couple and rowanclaw is the kits' adopted father)
it culminates when blackstar comes over to address tawnypelt's kits and sees rowanclaw. and his eyes squint a bit at him. rowanclaw shrinks into himself a bit. blackstar looms over him, glowering.
"rowanclaw. i heard you fathered tawnypelt's kittens... despite supposedly not being able to sire kittens at all."
rowan and tawny both look at each other in panic, realizing it was a stupid move to bank on this. rowan goes over escape plans and attacks that could potentially stun blackstar for a moment...
when blackstar pats him on the shoulder, and goes "good for you. a true shadowclan warrior always finds a way to get what he wants."
and he fucking leaves.
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