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contamination, unconventional, and mistake jpeg with 2, 3, 4, and 11!

putting under a Read More because this is long as fuck

Contamination2: What scene did you first put down?I had a lot of scraps of Vegeta’s flashbacks sitting in a disorganized drafts folder before I actually started outlining the story; none of them actually ended up in the final product, although some of them made it into Orbital Decay instead.As for the first thing I put down that actually DID make it into the story, it was this passage:

But the years and battles between them had worked slowly to dissolve Vegeta’s antagonism toward his rival, and now Vegeta was forced to confront the truth: what lay between them was not the same shape as hatred, and ran far deeper than any obsession. It had been forged the day they had first faced off in a barren, crumbling Earthling wasteland, and had since bound them across time and space and even death. It would have been easy to say that the Fusion had sealed it, that the crude melding of soul and mind and body was what had finally crystallized the link between them, but the truth was they had been promised to each other long before that

I literally woke up in the middle of the night with most of that paragraph suddenly existing fully-formed in my head and I just frantically started typing it into my phone like “what the fuck what the FUCK???” (i don’t understand my writing process, either) 3: What’s your favorite line of narration?my fave was the airlock scene, especially the part where Vegeta Almost Fuckin Dies:

His umbilical had been ripped off in the blast, and had torn a massive hole from the front of his suit in the process. He could feel his ki sizzling across his body, protecting him from the effects of the sudden decompression, but it was futile—without the tether, there was no oxygen, no pressure, and he gasped silently for air that never came. The backup power in his suit kicked in uselessly, and he was vaguely aware of every read-out on his HUD flashing a furious red, trying in vain to alert him of his predicament. As if he weren’t aware already. He couldn’t breathe—everything else was secondary.

He was going to die out here.

4: What’s your favorite line of dialogue?

“So that’s what you’re doing, Kakarot?” he shouted. “Trying to bait me? Trying to tempt me into, what, lashing out in some senseless act of destruction?”

Goku rose an eyebrow, his expression shifting to condescension. “It worked for Babidi.”

Kakarot is so fun to write, he’s such a bastard??? 11: What do you like best about this fic?I am completely, shamelessly self-indulgent when it comes to the sci-fi/horror tropes lmao

Unconventional2: What scene did you first put down?I wrote this one in chronological order; that’s generally how I write actually.

3: What’s your favorite line of narration?

Vegeta, face buried against her neck as he moves within her, is too distracted to notice when she reaches for her bedside table, grabbing a bottle there and lobbing it in Goku's direction. Goku catches it reflexively, and his eyes widen when he realizes it's a bottle of lubricant, branded with the ubiquitous Capsule Corp logo. He exchanges a look with Bulma, who is visibly shaking as she tries to suppress her laughter.

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4: What’s your favorite line of dialogue?

“You knew?” Goku accuses. “You knew she knew?”

“As if I would bother hiding it from her,” Vegeta mutters, rolling his eyes. “Bulma knows everything, Kakarot.”

11: What do you like best about this fic?I just love Goku/Vegeta/Bulma sO MUCH THEY LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH

mistake.jpeg2: What scene did you first put down?Same as Unconventional; written from start to finish

3: What’s your favorite line of narration? Goku getting DICKED THE FUCK DOWN:

Vegeta’s pace soon became relentless, and he fucked Goku into the mattress hard enough that Goku struggled to catch his breath. Vegeta’s fist pulled tighter on Goku’s hair with each thrust, and Goku’s eyes and mouth watered at the blissful pain of it. He didn’t know how much longer he could last like this—he felt like he was about to burn up completely beneath Vegeta, his hands knotting so hard into the bedsheets that his knuckles ached from it.

4: What’s your favorite line of dialogue? Obviously, Goku’s perfect reaction to Vegeta’s dick pic:

Kakarot:

:O :O :O ????

11: What do you like best about this fic? The text messages!!!! That kind of dialogue was SO MUCH FUN to write, especially Goku’s texts

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