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theanoninyourinbox · 3 years

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Longstar AU plotpoints

For @blupple-pie, who requested more Longstar AU! Thanks for the interest!

First off, the name changes for reference!

Longtail = Longstar

Princess = Flamewish

Tiny/Scourge = Frostfoot

Squirrelflight = Foxflight

Leafpool = Swiftpool

Snowkit = Snowthorn

Mistlekit = Mistlenose

Shrewpaw = Shrewleg

Lionblaze = Lionblossom

Jayfeather = Jaywhisker

Hollyleaf = Hollywish

Ivypool = Ivyleaf

And original Characters Flyshadow and Coldlight, kits that are claimed by Frostfoot as his own, but it’s unknown if he fathered them. But he’s absolutely their dad, no matter the blood.

So I played very loose and free with the timeline, because a) it’s been a while since I read the original and b) I didn’t care, I just wanted to have fun!

Anyways, here’s the major plot points!

Wishkit survives and is found in the woods by some wandering humans who nurse her back to health, and rename her Nutmeg. She falls for Jake, and has her litter.

The encounter with Tiny, Thistleclaw, Bluefur, and Tigerclaw goes as canon up to a point, but Tigerpaw hurts Tiny badly enough that Bluefur brings him back to Thunderclan. He's in the Medicine cat den healing up, and bonds with Spottedpaw/leaf (I can’t remember how old she is) and eventually, he sees there’s something wrong. After some coaxing, and talking with Bluefur (who’s starting to see Tiny as a surrogate son), she spills the beans about Thistleclaw, and hoo boy does he get permabanished reeeaalll fast, pretty much leaves a cat-shaped dust cloud. Tiny becomes Frostpaw, and Tigerpaw gets mentored by uhhh Bluefur or Thrushpelt. Then canon continues until...

The fight between Longtail and Rusty! They’re fighting and Rusty’s pinned when out of left field WHAM! Princess, who is a Concerned Sibling, sees Kitty Fight Club and her precious sibling getting walloped and absolutely Y E E T S Longtail off her bro. Bluestar is thankfully impressed she snuck up on camp, and can toss a full-grown warrior like a leaf in a strong breeze, and decides to induct them both into Thunderclan. Now Firepaw, seeing as he’s had some weird dreams, become’s Spottedleaf’s apprentice, and Flamepaw becomes Bluestar’s. Canon continues, with character swaps and more apprentice interactions until...

Yellowfang! See, Fireheart looks identical to Wishkit, except for his pelt, and Flamewish has her pelt. So when Yellowfang tackles Firepaw while he gathers herbs, she has an emotional flashback, and cut to Firepaw bringing a traumatized old lady back home, Bluestar can I keep her? Canon continues until...

The death of Lionheart...Longtail heroically throws himself into battle, and is named Deputy, to his and almost everyone’s surprise. Tigerclaw does try to kill Bluestar later, but it’s both Longtail and Flamewish that confront him. Longtail knocks him off her, and Flamewish yeets him out of the den. Canon continues until...

Snowkit! The hawk swoops but is intercepted by a pissed off Speckletail and Brackenfur, saving his life but at the cost of crippling Speckletail and sending her to the elder’s den when Snowkit and Mistlekit become apprentices. Canon continues until...

Cloudkit! So Flamewish wanders off to Two-leg place and comes back pregnant! Whoops! So Flamewish becomes nursery bound, and befriends Brindleface, who agrees to nurse Cloudkit, who becomes like a sibling to Fernkit, Ashkit, Flykit, and Coldkit. Canon continues until...

Tigerstar attacking Windclan! His attack on Gorsepaw appears to kill the apprentice, but after the attackers leave, he wobbles his head up like “Ha! Gottem! I need a doctor!” His injuries are substantial, but he survives, losing some hearing and walking with a severe limp, but compensating with keen vision and smell, and sharp tactical skills. He later becomes Gorseflicker, then eventually Gorsestar! Canon continues until...

At some point before Bloodclan shows up, but after the Dogs attack, Longtail, just promoted to Longstar, and Flamewish have a Feelings Jam and start cat-dating. She’s glad he didn’t make her Deputy, and likes Whitestorm for it. And somewhere in there, Frostfoot brings in two kits he claims are his now. He found them, finders keepers. Canon continues until...

Bloodclan emerges! But it’s not Scourge obviously, but a familiar face with a new name - Thistleclaw to Tyrant! When Tigerclaw is revealed to have killed Bluestar, Tyrant whips around and uses his cat-openers on his former apprentice, insta-killing him on the spot. The warning is given, the Battle happens, and a few new things happen as well!

Whitestorm gets pinned by Bone, but the Apprentice Squad, with Flypaw and Coldpaw, knock him over and destroy his stupid face. Graystripe defends Fireheart, still his best friend, from Darkstripe, but Darkstripe survives and limps off after the battle, with the ghost of Tigerstar whispering in his ear.

And that’s the first part! Next up, the appearance of Darktail/Darkmoon, the Journey, and the Three! Stay tuned, probably tomorrow!

#Warrior cats #warrior cats au #warriors #Longtail #Longstar #longstar au #rewrite #I need a name for this au #any suggestions?#my art

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wednesdaywarriorswc · 4 years

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so since my expanded crowfeather kills ashfur AU actually gained some traction i’m gonna expand on some different parts. today: Breezepelts involvement.

-He’s born to Nightcloud and Crowfeather,the couple aren’t mates but they both love and dote on their son.

-he’s 4 moons younger than holly jay and lion.

-he’s generally a good cat. determined to prove himself as a strong warrior. he gets a crush on heatherpaw pretty young.

-he notices heatherpaw sneaks out some nights and follows her to the mouth of the tunnels one night. he waits for her to come back before confronting her on what she’s doing. she explains it’s harmless and her and lionpaw are just having fun and begs breezepaw to not rat her out. he agrees not to but tells her she can’t carry on forever.

-he’s heartbroken but continues to try and be her friend. his crush becoming slightly obvious to most cats but heather and breeze.

-the tunnel scene with the siblings when they almost drown still happens and breezepaw gets jealous of lionpaw as he’s strong and brave.

-the dark forest recruit him under the pretence of making him a strong warrior and gaining heatherpaws heart. he quickly realises that the dark forest is evil and when he mentions this to his DF mentor, he’s given a vaguely threatening comment about “wanting to be stronger” and that “you wouldn’t poor heatherpaw to find out would you” with the implication of hurting her.

-he continues to train there in fear but puts on a brave face becoming very respected. when he becomes a warrior and antfur is seriously getting into it he becomes more and more afraid.

-he decides to tell kestreflight and onestar what’s happening. they’re in shock and angry but use this to their advantage and breeze becomes windclans DF spy. the clan begins to train more with moves breeze teaches onestar in secret.

-he’s warned by kestrel not to tell anyone else in case he gets in trouble but he decides to tell heather tail and crowfeather. crow tells him he’s doing a good thing and that he’s proud of his sons bravery.

-one night antfur wakes him up and says crowfeather just snuck out. they follow him and see him meeting up with leafpool and they overhear that ashfur knows leaf and crow had kits and he wants to announce it to everyone.

-breeze drags antfur away and he’s confused and angry and upset that his dad lied to him and broke the code so much. antfur wants to stir up trouble in honour of the dark forest but breezepelt tells him he won’t have to as ashfur seems pretty set on doing it. antfur agrees to keep quiet and leaves. breezepelt stays out on the moors all night unsure what to think.

-breeze is cold to crowfeather and nightcloud for several days and is eventually pulled aside by his dad who asks him what’s wrong. breeze explodes at him asking him why he did it and did he love them and can he be trusted. crowfeather begrudgingly answers his questions and tells him he loved leafpool. but it’s been over a long time. and although they’re his kits. he’s never had any contact and they don’t know. for their safety. and it doesn’t change a thing about how he loves breeze.

-breezepelt accepts this. but doesn’t forgive him immediately. his upset fuelled partly by the almost relationship between lionblaze and heather tail.

-at the next gathering crowfeather goes hunting during the day and ashfur isn’t there like breezepelt and antfur thought he would be. antfur is stressed havoc hasn’t been wreaked but breezepelt just shrugs and tells him maybe he wasn’t invited to the gathering this moon.

-a few days later breezepelt and crowfeather go hunting together and crows request, to try and fix their relationship. they bump into jayfeather and leafpool gathering herbs at the border and jayfeather and breezepelt awkwardly leave as leafpool wants to talk to crowfeather.

-crow and jay awkwardly talk about mundane things. breeze says he knows crows their dad and he doesn’t resent jay and his siblings. it’s not their fault they exist. jay is surprised but is grateful for his kindness. leafpool and crowfeather get angry and upset with each other and they leave. confused jay and breeze say goodbye.

-crow says that hollyleaf has been accused of ashfurs murder and is being put on trial in camp. she’s in a makeshift prison and is being looked at and treated like dirt. breeze says he’s sorry and asks if it was hollyleaf. he gets angry for a second and says no. it wasn’t. breeze realises it was him. and they’re silent the whole way back to camp.

-brokenstar and tigerstar ask breezepelt what he knows about the situation in training as they’ve heard what happened from the thunderclan trainees. he tries to protect his father but he gets pinned down and reminded if he doesn’t comply heathertail is such a pretty she cat and it would be a shame for her to have horrible scars.

-he tells them it was his dad and they use this to their advantage. Antfur announces it to windclan and makes breeze back him up. windclan send crowfeather to thunderclan where he isn’t punished considering ashfur did try to kill fire star and squirrelflight and was conspiring with hawkfrost and is left to windclan. windclan demote crowfeather to apprentice and he isn’t allowed to leave camp without a warrior present and he isn’t allowed to go to gatherings, all this indefinitely.

-crowfeather accepts his punishment. he sulks but works hard to protect himself. breezepelt takes this time to start forgiving crow seeing him so broken and hurt and lost.

-next moon at the gathering they get an announcement that hollyleaf died in a badger den collapse in thunderclan and they hadn’t been able to retrieve her body. everyone is shocked and nobody talks to breezepelt on the way back. heathertail gives him comfort and says it would be best for crowfeather if it came from him.

-he tells crowfeather what happened and he collapses into himself. his daughter died because of him. crow asks to go out of camp to mourn in peace. onestar allows this is breezepelt goes with him. allowing him to mourn without judgement.

-after awhile crow tells breezepelt to head back as he needs a minute on his own and he’ll join him. breezepelt figures out what he’s going to do and gets heathertail and tells her he’s going to the tunnels to find hollyleafs body. she agrees to go with him as they both know what can happen if you lose your way in the tunnels. they’re far behind him but manage to catch up as he gets to a tunnel entrance crowfeather wasn’t running and didn’t know where he was going.

-he’s cross the two would put themselves on the line for him but grateful they would help. breezepelt tells him it’s not fair his own kid can’t be buried and that crow would do the same for breeze. crow says he’s do more for breeze at even the implication of danger.

-when they’re in the tunnels fallen leaves greets them, recognising heathertail from her time down there. he agrees to take them to hollyleaf as she’s dying and trapped under a rockfall and he’s struggling to maintain her. they dig her out together and take her back to windclan. promising to tell fallen leaves if she makes it.

-she does survive. with a broken back leg and lots of muscle damage and scratches. the clan wants punishment for crow disobeying orders but onestar declares that he suffered enough thinking she was dead. having to dig out your daughters corpse is punishment enough.

-over the next moon hollyleaf begins to heal, crow and breeze repair their relationship and crow becomes friends with hollyleaf. hollyleaf tells breezepelt to stop being afraid and to tell heathertail he loves her as he doesn’t want to miss the chance and regret it forever.

-breezepelt manages to work up the courage and tell her. she tells him she likes him too and they work towards being mates. breezepelt is the happiest he’s been in moons but knows what the dark forest could do to her so tells her to keep it secret from antfur. she’s offended to have to hide their relationship but she agrees in the end.

-hollyleaf goes home after two moons of healing, they told thunderclan she was there almost immediately. accusations were thrown but nothing came of it in the end. she’s happy to go home and crowfeather tells her he loves her and her siblings and that he hopes they don’t hate him.

-life goes on for a few moons, the dark forest recruits more cats and breezepelt continues his charade.

-when ivypaw joins the df he tries to subtly warn her to stay away but she doesn’t get it and he gets worried for the apprentice.

-he’s forced to go to the moon pool with brokenstar when poppy frost goes in an attempt to wreak havoc. jayfeather puts up a good fight and jay is horrified after everything they’d been through breeze would trust them. breeze pins down jayfeather and tells him “if you know me so well read my mind then” when in is mind he tells him to pin down breeze then leap forward and brokenstar would be right there.

-they win the fight defeating brokenstar and jayfeather asks why he helped them while he was attacking them. breeze tells him he doesn’t believe in the df ways and is a spy for windclan. they’ve been training for a fight against them since he was a young warrior with the skills he learns from them. but antfur is a true believer so he’s in danger all the time.

-jay tells him ivy is their spy and they confer on matter between the clans from then on. they gather the leaders and tell them what’s happening. and agree to train their clans with the two apprentices help. breezepelt tells the leaders to not be so harsh to all the df trainees when the fight comes. they’re threatened in the df if they want to leave and some don’t even know it’s true purpose.

-when it comes to the final battle. breezepelt pretend to be on the df side and stands with them. the clan inc. crow, night and heather are shocked. he gives them a fake sneer and then throws himself at the nearest df spirit, attacking them, pinning them down and killing their spirit. he’s accused of being a traitor to the df and he agrees that he is and the battle begins properly.

-at the end of the battle he finds out about ivypools death and feels a strong sense of guilt and responsibility. he fully forgives his family after the battle. telling them he doesn’t hate them and that life is messy and he loves them.

-after the battle, ashfoot still dies and onestar makes breezepelt his deputy. crowfeather is so proud that if he couldn’t become leader he’s glad his son could.

#warrior cats #warriors #avos #a vision of shadows #firestar #bramblestar #wc au #crowfeather kills ashfur au #the last hope #windclan #breezepelt #leafpool #hollyleaf #fftalks

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