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snail-and-snail · 2 years
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peacefulmultishipper · 3 months
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Tldr; The biggest piece of evidence for “The Bees was planned from beeginning” was debunked ten years ago by hazleapricot aka Arryn Zach (The VA of Blake) who was simply making a lesbian joke about her character and Pyrrha being a secret relationship.
Don’t blame the Bees fans for not knowing about as this was from ten years ago and the only way to find it is via reblogs since the account is dead or being linked directly link to the post, still sucks that this spread as far as it did because shippers wanted solid proof that their OTP was planned and not the writers just thrown to pander to them.
(Don’t worry, this will be the only time I will use the main RWBY and Bee tags as I want to spread awareness to this even if just to a few people.)
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sxnniiwrites · 3 months
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Some common grammar and spelling mistakes I see in fics:
- "Alot" isn't a word. there wasn't "alot" of food at dinner, there was "a lot" of food.
- compliment = a nice thing you say to someone. complement = things that go together: complementary colors, flavors, etc
- lose = to no longer have something. loose = the opposite of tight.
- i.e. = in other words. e.g. = example given.
- peek = a quick look. peak = the top. pique = create/provoke: "piqued interest"
- ensure = to make sure. insure = protect with an insurance plan.
these are just a few. let me know others that bother you!
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novlr · 8 months
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6pixiepop9 · 2 months
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hmmmm.
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empressyu123 · 5 months
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The journey of our choice
chapter 1- who is it?
Ego: good evening unpolished gems i have an announcement to make.
everyone turns to his attention as they listen in
Ego: The JIA is making a party for all the players here,
Some scoffs can be heard and some tool their eyes
Ego: we will be having a gathering of everyone one family of choice. It can be anyone you want, all this is for the media to see the relationship with family.
Isagi’s eyes widen and in hope has he is in his own thoughts as Ego keeps talking.
then once everyone goes to take their calls Isagi goes to his room to dial a number
Isagi waits as the phone rings
??: …
Isagi: ah! hey i wanted to call you and tell you about…
after explaining the voice on the phone laughs
??: … … ..
Isagi: You’re coming tomorrow? thank you so much! i can’t wait to see you again, bye!
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one fine day in blue lock Isagi yoichi is looking happier then ever. The others are questioning why he’s constantly looking at his phone. They encounter a new person
Isagi: *looking at his phone happily*
Some people are at lunch whispering about Isagi.
Nagi: Ne why is Isagi so happy?
Bachira: Yea, why is Isagi smiling at his phone so much?
Chirgiri: Normally Nagi’s the one on his phone all day, it’s weird seeing him like this
Hiori: yea… it’s been like this since this morning.
Kurona: maybe, maybe it’s because of the gathering tonight?
Yukimiya: Probably not you saw his face when they announced that. he didn’t look that bothered about it.
Isagi gets started as he gets a ping and looks at his message then smiles brightly.
Nanase: Maybe he has a girlfriend?
Bachira: No way, he would have told me that if he did. I’m his best friend!
Chigiri: (Rolls his eyes) yea right, even if he does have a girlfriend he won’t tell you everything just because of that.
Reo: well… we could ask him if he does then?
everyone looks at each other nervously when Nikki suggested
Nikko: maybe some happened to Kaiser, normally he’s this happy when something bad happens to him-
the doors burst open
Kaiser: Oh Yoichi! let’s play~
Ness: Yoichi you better not ignore Kaiser~
everyone there: (speak of the devil)
Kaiser: Yoichi, Yoichi, Yyyoooiiiichhhi~
Isagi: *looking up from his phone, then smiles*
this takes everyone by surprise even Kaiser and Ness.
Isagi: sorry i can’t entertain you today naked emperor, i’m in a good mood today and i’d rather you not effect it with your bullshit. *laughs*
Isagi gets up from his seat, everyone is still shocked and frozen and watch as he walks away.
snapping out of their trance they decided not to think about it to much
but there was only thing on everyone’s mind was: (what the fuck was that?)
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training with Munchin Bastard, Uber and PxG
the PxG watches the small match between Bastard and Uber
Hiori: Get the ball!
Isagi: i’ve got it!
Yukimiya: not so fast Egoist!
Raichi: Fat chance!
Kurona: Here, here!
everyone was zoned out and focused on practice
Isagi: i’ve got it! *about to score*
Barou: *blocks his goal* did you forget about us Donkey!?
Akiu: let’s get this started!
Lorenzo: Okay 50 million~
after that small match a woman comes up to them
Anri: Isagi! someone calling you,
Isagi: Hm? oh, thanks! *smiles, then takes the phone and leaves*
everyone watches as he leaves
Shidou: Whow little isagi doesn’t normally leave practice for calls~
Nanase: i wonder if it’s the girlfriend…
Everyone (except Kurona, Hiori, Yukimiya, Niko and Nanase) looks at nanase: Girlfriend?!
Rin: The hell lukewarm?!
Iguroi: Wh-what?
Akiu: No way!
Ness: it can’t be that shitty clown…
Kaiser:…
Snuffy: what’s this about a girlfriend?
ever turns their heads to the 3 master walking in
Noa: …*raises his brows*
Loki: He has a girlfriend? huh,
Yukimiya: we don’t know for sure if it’s a girlfriend!
Barou and Rin: then why the fuck would you bring that up!
Shidou: Calm down, ya just jealous that ain’t you~
Barou: Shut up donkey!
Rin: I’ll kill you!
as everyone is trying to split up the fight The masters are have their own conversation
Loki: you think it’s true? the girlfriend thing i mean.
Noa: it’s really none of my business
Snuffy: not even when it comes to your favourite protégée?
Noa: i don’t have favourites
Snuffy: whatever you say~
Snuffy: but still it’s is an intriguing thought tho, blue locks hero having a date.
Noa: *sigh*
Loki: hey,
they both turn to the youngest master
Loki: shouldn’t we stop this fight?
Snuffy: i guess we should *look’s tiredly*
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end of chapter 1
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kaylinalexanderbooks · 8 months
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@gracehosborn is reading through my WIP The Secret Portal now, and she's pointing out dumb mistakes I made seven years ago that I somehow never noticed
Thanks for the help hon I appreciate it. It's also hilarious on my behalf.
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obamousse · 3 months
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Before they became lovers, Osasuna found each other very interesting people.
Suna was interesting to Osamu because he was a lone wolf - someone who did not give a damn about what the world perceives of him, who will go against it to follow what he wants and what he thinks is right. Osamu, meanwhile, thought everyone needs approval from others, everyone needs to get along well with one another and socialize. He was intrigued: how could Suna be alone so well, like he was born for it? How could he be his bitter, sarcastic self without getting hurt by people or caring about hurting other people? How could he be so uncaring, about anything at all, not having any passion, anything to love? He had never seen Suna cry in any of the matches or show a genuine smile. Osamu was plain confused -and curious - because Suna was so emotionally unavailable or mentally tough, but he could come in handy when Osamu asks him for advice on whether he should leave volleyball. Until he peeled back, layer by layer until he found a vulnerable boy behind that heart of stone, a boy who also loved volleyball with all his heart like his brother, who was as willed to win as, or even more, than anyone else on the court.
Suna found Osamu interesting because he was a walking contradiction. Everyone sees him as a nice person - until he flips his brother off and anyone who crosses them. He's calm, mature - until he has to compete with his brother and becomes a 5-year-old. He always seek advice from everyone - until he decided to quit volleyball, something he could have an entire career and secure a wealthy life in, to pursue what he is truly passionate for. Suna has always thought Osamu would pursue volleyball as expected of him. He heard Osamu's reasons to pursue a career in cooking, Suna wonders at Osamu's determination, passion, and way of thinking, which even Suna would find utterly foolish. He is impressed, because even though Osamu appears not as brash, passionate, stubborn or strong as his brother, he has strength and fortitude that certainly makes you curious. Suna better saves Osamu a word of gratitude - because the moment he spiked to the other net for the last time in third year, it all clicked in to him those words Osamu said. He knew it was a calling he could follow even though he was blind, how Osamu would relish in his love for food at the end of the day, no matter what their parents expected of them, no matter how everyone convinced them and tried to pull them back.
All in all, they were hooked onto each other, though it was only a light, tingling feeling of curiosity at each other's character.
TLDR: Osamu and Suna are foil characters of each other, and they realized so when Osamu confessed to Suna he wanted to pursue a career in cooking, which made Suna realize his love for volleyball he had not recognized for years.
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scaip · 2 years
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About the archons' lack of human representatives
Let's count:
-Venti is an air elemental spirit that took on the form of his fallen friend. No vision, just glass.
-Zhongli is a qiling-dragon that decided to permanently look like a guy. False vision.
-Baal is a marionette done by Makoto after Ei sacrificed her body so her sister, Beelzebul, could ascend (WE. NEED. MORE. LORE. ABOUT. THOSE MOMENTS.). Doesn't bother with a fake vision like Venti and Zhongli because she's the first (active) archon we see that doesn't hide.
-Makoto/Beelzebul was a human that ascended to goodhood?/ Celestia? (after Ei sacrificed herself). Makoto openly went out as the Raiden Archon, and Ei does the same.
-The Raiden Shogun is a marionette done by Baal. Doesn't use a vision. Does it have a soul?
-Nahida has pointy ears. Like Klee. I see and elf girl in here. I Don't recall seeing her with a vision (feel free to correct me).
Isn't it interesting how the majority of the deities that are supposed to look after realms populated by humans and other creatures (but mostly, humans) are non-human? And lack a vision? Their powers come naturally. Makoto is the exception here (she is such an interesting character).
Isn't it ironic how the ones that are supposed to overlook humanity aren't human themselves? Again, Makoto and Ei -well, their souls were human at first- are the exceptions here unless the game's plot teaches us they weren't human either.
A huge theme on Genshin is humanity becoming independent from Celestia.
I also remember that theory that states Visons are Celestia's tools to control potentially dangerous humans for their rule. Curiously, archons have no visions with them.
Like Celestia has a particular way to approach human and humanoid creatures' rule. Unlike vishaps, humans are free to roam and mess up, as long as they don't find stuff that questions current Celestia's hegemony or rebel. Like ants in a terrarium, with the exception that they seem to be interested in their advancement. After all, The Second Who Came still follows the Primordial One's choice to focus on humans.
Independence and autonomy are huge themes on Genshin. And seeing the Archons slowly granting more freedom to their people speaks volumes of that. This is about people in a magical setting saying no to the divine. And magic isn't synonym with divinity. Magic can have divine origins, but not all magic has divine attributes.
They are going against the divine's intentions.
And I think that choosing to move forward from their non-human archons speaks a lot about the independence and autonomy themes in Genshin's plot.
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lucithecrow · 1 year
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I was a loud person, but for you I was quiet
I was a smart person, but for you I was dumb
I was a sad person, but for you I was cheerful
Until I realized,
If you really loved me,
Why do I have to pretend?
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8thmuse · 1 year
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and when god crafts the clouds, she does it without a care, but u still stare at them like they are the most beautiful thing u seen in your life
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thecalmdaisy · 1 year
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Social Anxiety was a Blessing and a Curse: The Childhood
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It's crazy how social anxiety can literally turn you into a whole different person. On the inside, you're full of energy, super social, and want to spread your true colors to others, but for some reason, you just can’t seem to let the inside of you come out. You feel this sense of fear that you can't seem to fully understand, a fear that can stem from many things in our lives, such as judgment, personal insecurities, stress, bullying, past traumas and many other things. In my own case, I was afraid of being judged by others for being so different from the societal norms of a normal Black girl. So, what did I do? Well, I stayed quiet and never let anyone in unless I knew they wanted to be my friend. No matter what, I was like as an individual. And let me tell you, not many made it into my small circle. But what can I say? I was the shy one.
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The Beginning
After my last year of elementary school, my mom, my little sister, and I had just moved to a totally different state to start a new life. I was actually excited about it, but I knew how much it kinda sucked leaving behind the friends I had bonded with for years. But shockingly, the thought of making new friends at the time didn’t scare me much until the first day of middle school actually approached. As I walked through those huge double doors, I felt so much more awkward than I had anticipated. I guess seeing all those unfamiliar faces really overwhelmed me, and the thought of possibly being too weird for others was swirling around inside my head like crazy. This caused my lips to remain sealed, which equaled to social life being absolutely nonexistent. As time crept by, I started to think about my old friends frequently and returned home, dreading how I couldn't seem to fit in with others. But I knew my anxiety played a huge part in it. I must say that 6th grade year was truly a lonely one for me. I sat alone on the bus, at lunch, and in class, which made me unhappy because I knew I could be a great friend to someone. I even remember some nights before bed I would cry to GOD, asking,“ Why can't I be outgoing like everyone else?” I was so tired of being the quiet one who couldn’t seem to get out of her head at such a young age. As the 6th grade year slowly went by, my mom got me accepted into a performing arts middle school I had no clue about. But I was enthusiastic because I loved acting at the time and thought joining the drama program seemed like a great opportunity for me to break out of my shell.
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It didn't work at all. I would literally shake like crazy, my heart would beat through my chest, and I forgot my lines once the spotlight hit me.
Now, back to the story. There I was in the 7th grade, with no friends, at a new school, in a new year. As the school year progressed, I did manage to make a friend after two months. However, it was largely because she talked to me and broke me out of my shell a bit. She was a very talkative person, and I was a good listener. It was truly a match made in heaven. She became my only true friend that year, and I was totally happy with that. By the time 8th grade rolled around, more people were talking to me because they had seen me the year before, and they all started to realize how shy I was, especially the class clowns for some reason. But I absolutely didn’t mind that because I love to laugh. So hands down, that year stands as the best school year of my life. My friends at the time made me feel so welcomed, which helped break me out of my shell for the entire 8th grade year. As 9th grade approached, sadly me and my friends had to split apart to different high schools, which really sucked for me because as you know, I'm not a great conversationalist, and it was nice to have friends who appreciated my weirdness. But as I entered the new school year as a freshman, it felt like a reset button had pushed me back in time because there I sat all alone most of the time, chilling outside on the back steps before class started preparing to sit alone at lunch or skip lunch and head straight to the library. Not having friends again really sucked. Later that year, though, I became friends with one very special person who opened my eyes spiritually. She didn't have many friends either, and we both seemed to click. I started to sit at lunch with her, go to Bible study with her, and sit on the bus with her. She was literally my only friend that year, and I couldn't have asked for more.
As I approached my 10th grade year, things started to get better. People who saw me last year started to talk to me more, and we became associates. My friend from the year before graduated and left for college, so I never got to speak to her again, which really sucked, because I wish I could’ve told her thank you for reopening my eyes back to what was important in life. Once I made a few friends that sophomore year, I started getting comfortable at my school—until my mom got accepted into law school in another state, which was amazing. Until this day, I am still so happy for my mom, and I completely understand why we left. So, again, I packed up and said goodbye to my friends and moved into a new home. As my 11th grade year started, I was still shy, and I only spoke when someone wanted to talk, but only small talk. I could never really hold a conversation, so I kept them short and sweet, which kept me from getting to know new people. But honestly, I didn't mind it at that time. Many people my age were into things I just didn't agree with. Therefore, I felt like it was safer for me to be alone and focus more on my spirituality. And through the process of just doing me, I was able to make three friends in the last two years of high school, and I was completely okay with that because they were the kind of people I wanted in my life, very caring, helpful, motivational, and understanding of what the word friend truly meant. Once the end of my last year of high school came to a close, I threw my cap proudly for all to see, before I officially said goodbye to the mixed emotions of my childhood life in the public school system.
To be continued….
“Being a bit of a loner isn’t so bad when you live in the world we live in.”
Q/A:
What happened to your friends from middle school?
We never spoke again after middle school. I didn’t have a phone or social media until the end of my freshman year of high school, so it was hard to keep in contact.
What happened to your high school friends?
We went on different paths and changed as individuals.
Is there more to the story?
Absolutely! Anxiety has been a huge part of my life.
Written By: V
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I just going to put this here because I’m honestly sick to death of the “Sisterhood” argument and already saw people bringing up Monty again on Reddit.
No, Monty never said he intended Team RWBY to be a sisterhood (Besides Yang and Ruby who are sisters), that bs came from a random website.
The closest thing is Monty saying the interaction between the girls in Volume 2 Chapter 10 were almost sisterly, not that they are unless there a post I missed where he said otherwise then link me it.
If you prefer Yang and Blake, Ruby and Weiss, ect to be strictly platonically with each other or prefer another ship entirely then that’s fine and cool but some of y’all need to stop bringing up a dead man so your preference can some weight to it.
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neptoons1998 · 1 year
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working on the last chapter of rolling dough. Uploading pretty soon.
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depressedorphan · 2 years
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Why do I only retain the negative and never the positive, I guess I’m use to people yelling at me to clean my room even though my sibling’s room look the same as mine, I’m used to the negative now every time some one say something positive I think they pitying me. I want to be positive but it’s hard when they tell you to “ lighten up” and that “it’s not that hard”  so I stoped try because why try if people are going to say that “I’m not trying hard enough” but they don’t know how hard I’ve been trying and hiding my mental health so they wouldn’t know if I’m not trying hard enough when they don’t give me a break. (Sorry for the spelling mistakes)
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meirohana-12 · 1 year
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Feelings
Here I am typing and writing what I feel, it is hard to describe what I want, the feeling of something heavy and a burden on your heart.  Why can’t I let it go? How do I let go of this thing? How can I prevent this feeling? So many questions I have so many things that are left unanswered. At 4:30 am, not sleeping instead listening to my spotify playlist while writing down my assignment that led to unfinished as this burden feeling not get out of my chest.  That was an immersive emotion that I can't describe, it let me think, in the tiny little space of my privacy room where my family member was asleep. The thoughts keep coming, making me overwhelmed and overthinking: am i a good enough child? Good enough for friends? Am i….will be needed and not feeling like left out?
It was a simple thought but it is enough to make me feel empty in my heart. And sometimes it led me to believe I deserved to be hated, I deserved to be unhappy but why was it painful?
Helping others, doing kindness because I knew someone deserved to have a bit of kindness in their life but ahahah i do have very bad luck.  Did you know the game that is widely spread across well I think is global? Genshin Impact you know, my friends said I have a huge luck since I keep winning 50/50 but I am always skeptical. If I have good luck, why am I always being used? Being taken advantage of? Always keep injured? Always make mistakes? Again it was left unanswered.  
But I don't really mind.  Maybe I did deserve it since we didn't know what sins we accidentally did.  Sometimes I want to learn to be cold-hearted like others, like my friends, unbothered by what others do and just solo in their life, doesn't really care about what others say or what.  Unfortunately, my bleeding heart can't stomach that personality.  It was too much for me.  Even though I've been hurt many times, the moment when you accidently do kindness at an unexpected place and get the reward which is a simple “thank you!” or a thankful and grateful face gives me the strength that..is okay to continue on kindness but of course i will not take kindly to those who take more than what they can. Dont worry over the years i learn to grow some backbone!.  My simple and most appreciated reward in helping is when someone remembers me and says thank you, it was simple but that small things always make me tear up.  In those years, I learned to see the boundaries which i can trust which i can't, trust issue is the worst when you wanna trust someone but your trauma over something holds you back. But that’s okay. Over the years I will learn to slowly overcome my trauma, I just have to hold on to that. 
Manhwa, manga, game and anime give me the second way to escape reality from the unknown pain I feel.  It was…a bit better, I can handle it when I am lost in that world, feeling okay but at the end of the day, I have to give back to my world which is reality, such a lonely feeling I feel sometimes. 
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