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quonit37 · 5 years

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Contestshipping Review - Part Fourteen - The Saffron Con

Index

-The Title-

PERFECTLY FINE I like it actually

-Episode Link-

I made this review and the next one a year after the rest of these and saw the links to the old ones stopped working so now instead of linking to links on youtube here is the episode on DailyMotion. Also this copy should we watched at 1.25 speed.

https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x59dmbl

-The Review-

0:00

That Narrator sounds awful

0:11

send out the Pokemans. I wonder if I should review the episodes May gets her Pokemon.

0:34

May: Squirtle and Munchlax don’t seem very excited about the Contest...

Max: Don’t forget May, they’ve never been in a Contest before

and now we’ve decided who we’re entering into the contest.

Everyones talking so slow and the pauses suck they’re just droning on.

0:46

Brock: What has you so exited going to this contest?

May: Partly it’s about getting my first Canto Ribbon... but mostly it’s about getting all my ribbons before Drew!

Hey look Drew was mentioned! Doesn’t excuse the fact that there is a 28 episode long break where we dont see him.

THEME SONG STARTS and i realize this upload is just slow WOW no wonder they sound like they are droning.

2:12

Ash: How come people are going in if the contest doesn’t start till tomorrow

To sign up probably?

2:35

Guy: So, the lights come up, you do your intro...

He seems like he’s important why dont we see him more? He’s like, a stage manager that makes sure everything goes to plan. There have been several times Team rocket has set up traps and whatever and this guy didn’t do anything??? Shouldn’t he be paying attention??? if he exists why doesn’t he do anything???

3:00

Brock: Do you know what Pokemon you’re gonna use may?

what a question

3:19

May: Is that... Vivian?

Ash: I think it is but she looks different

ahhhhh old memories first watching this. Vivian but more sports-y looking.

4:10

Sport Vivian: Espeon! Use Swift and follow up with Psychic!

Sport Vivian: Espeon finish up!

the anime contests are beautiful I really like watching them I forget what you can do with them. In the games i heard that they are just the worst thing in the world but in the games... what are you supposed to do? in a TV show you can actually combine attacks and have it look pretty and actually do cool stuff like SOMERSAULT and combine attacks and just do all these little things (Use attack but straight up) and use the stage in the games... it just doesnt fit. Personally I just the anime a lot more because I feel like you can actually do stuff with it. I might’ve hated Dawn but she and most of her Rivals did contests and those were beautiful.

4:35

Squirtle here to tell you that was EPIC. Just one watch of your preformence and he loved it! He wants to try it himself even! Stunning work keep up the effort.

5:00

May: I’m sorry! I just barley let go of him and he got away from me!

Let him pursue his dreeeaaams

7:15

May: :distressed: Why are you acting this way Squirtle?

Sport Vivian: You know what? I think he’s a born performer! I look forward to seeing him on stage.

Pokemon are not its and I will always correct you if you dont call them by their gender or they/them. Do you call your friend an ‘it’?

then there are clear ups on her being Vivian. her name is Lilian.

9:19

hey look Orange Juice.

May: Squirtle may look like a natural but this would be his first contest...

I’m with May. You guys should practice first and get an act together without jumping right into it. So many things could go wrong. Squirtle may have stage fright he’s a baby and forgets what to do he screws up because he hasn’t practiced enough... there are a lot of things.

6:36

Brock: Why nto jsut go with Skitty or Breautifly?

May: ...You know what im going to use Squirtle

I mean at least practice but yay do what you want. I think that using beautifly or Skitty though would be good because they are not Kanto pokemon so they are more cool because they are from somewhere else.

6:53

Speaker: Contestant your Pokemon are done with their checkups!

May: Oh yay! :goes to see her Pokemon: Hi the- AHHHHHHHHHH

That scream of terror can only mean one thing...

HARLEY

haha.

7:12

Harley: Well if it isn’t May! Long time no see huh?

7:20

Incoming contest-goer approaching.

Jessie: I’m sure you’ll be pleased to know I’ll be entering this contest

Girl that looks scared out of her wits: W-why yes of course.

it’s just Jessie calm down

Girl: Uh- sorry miss but this isnt a valid entree pass

oof nvm now Jessie is gonna get mad at you.

7:50

You’re so over the top guys keep at it

Jessie: As you can see im very important.

Girl, amused: Alright but the problem isnt you it’s that in order to enter contests here you need a Kanto ribbon pass not a Hoenn one.

2:27

Jessie: Well be a darling and give me a pass.

Girl: hehe, with plesure!

See Jessie is just being very enjoyably over the top here it’s great

3:35

WHY DID THEY TELEPORT TO THE MIDDLE OF A FOREST AGAIN

So she tries to ask James to use his Cacnia in a contest because she wants to use it and James gets upset because he doesnt want his little baby to get hurt but because of how stubborn Jessie is and Meowth explaining how “A contest is supposed to show a bond between the trainer and Pokemon so getting Cacnia to bond with Jessie might work” James says fine and hands over the Cacnia.

9:55

HEY LOOKS IT’S HARLEY AGAIN

May: Harley are you really Nurse Joy’s orderly?

Harley: Not officially, I just volunteered to help her out during the contest.

See isn’t he such a nice person offering to help out like that even though he probably has little to none experience helping pokemon using actual pokecenter suplies

10:10

Harley: My Cacturn was running a fever so I took him here and nurse Joy was so wonderful to me. Seeing how giving and unselfish she was made me feel ashamed for the kind of person I’d been.

Tragic backstory of the year

Harley: So I’ve decided to turn over a new leaf and what better way than helping others?

Even though he’s still an ass to May he’s still helping out with other’s pokemon and nurse joy and so in the end he still helped out.

SO harley is still entering the contest oh boy

10:30

Harley: Which reminds me have you heard about the rules?

May: ...Hear about what rules?

Harley: You can substitute Pokemon between the first and second rounds here. Kinda cool huh?

I though that’s how all contests work. You use one pokemon for the first round then you use another for the second. He probably means something different and it probably lying so

10:40

May: Are you sure?

Max: DONT YOU LISTEN TO HIM MAY

See May Max got your back

hahaha

Harley: Nurse Joy!

Harley: Now isnt it true trainers can switch pokemon between the first and second rounds?

Nurse Joy: Yes of course they can!

Oh so it is the rule I was talking about. That’s what I thought.

11:22

Harley: Now do you see I’m trustworthy May?

One simple truth doesnt fix a history of lies and deception.

May: Well.. I-

Nurse Joy: You must be friends of Harley’s! Where are you from?

Rude how dare you interrupt May.

Harley: May is an excellent coordinator and one of my very best friends from back in Hoenn.

And now Harley is answering for her! Let the girl talk.

Nurse Joy: Well you have good taste in friends! Harley has sure been a bug help around here!

I mean with all of the Pokemon that Nurse Joy doesnt help while she is being a judge of a contest instead Harley helping out to me outweighs whatever thing he’s gonna do to May, a single trainer.

12:28

May decides on Squirtle and Cumbuskin! I think that that if she were gonna use squirtle it should definitely be in the appeal rounds because it’s not a very good battler yet.

11:30

Harley: May that Cumbuskin of yours is really cool!

But we all know that Cacturn is cooler

Harley: And I cant say enough about your little squirtle.

May: Thanks a lot Harley :)

Nice comments if she wants it to stay that way May should compliment Harley’s awesome Pokemon. Like cacturn.

May: I’m sorry that I doubted you.

That’s a bit far but okay.

Max: I dunno I still think somethings up.

Harley: Whaaaat what can i do to convince you!

Max is not as easily fooled but at the same time he’s not as trustworthy. “Your strengths are your curses and your curses are your strengths.”

13:16

:Nurse Joy leaves:

Harley: Ohhh and speaking of the contest

now wait there pal I’d like to fact check everything with Nurse joy before I trust you. If you are consistently telling the truth for a while I’ll trust you.

Harley: You’ve entered right?

May: Ah- No I haven’t! I forgot!

Max: I told you that we should’ve done it while we were back at the stadium!

Harley: it’s nothing to worry about! You still have your pass from the Hoenn league contests right?

May: Yeah?

Harley: That pass will get you into this contest too and registration is open till 11 tomarrow. There’s no big rush May.

Great I’ll go get it now so that I dont have to worry about it later. Thanks for telling me though.

Then they all go for lunch while Harley does an evil luagh

14:08

It’s Jessie time!

She’s practicing for her contest appeal with Cacnia, but Cacnia isnt really all too pleased that she doesnt get to be with James and instead it’s the Jessie girl she has to hug. She starts crying and goes to hug James for help.

Also my headcanon is that Cacnia is a girl so deal with it.

Your bby loves you now deal with it

Meowth: You gotta bond with Jessie Cacnia! We know it’s an ugly job but we gotta deal with it!

Meowth you don’t say those things in front of Jessie you say that elsewhere.

14:46

Meowth: Cacnia!

And so then cacnia and Jessie decide to just get it over with.

14:58

Back with Harley!

Harley: You’ll never guess who I ran into here in Kanto!

Is is drew

Harley: Drew!

WHAT

--WAIT BUT-

May: Ya, I ran into him too.

Oh this is after On cloud Archinine. :( I like Drew why cant he be here.

Harley: Ahh :D I wonder if your little rival will enter this contest.

I wish...

15:12

Ash: What’s wrong? Are you still suspicious?

No I’m just mad that we have to go back later in the morning why cant we just enter the contest now?

15:15

Maybe picking Cacnia for a contest wasn’t the best idea look she’s all tangled in your hair.

WAIT A SECOND I HAVE OLD MEMORIES OF THE NEXT EPISODE

James: My poor Cacnia!

Jessie: Why don’t you worry about me for a change?!!

May: What’s going on?

Harley: My guess is that she’s a coordinator and that she and her pokemon had some sort of training accident. It happens sometimes during contests.

15:39

Nurse Joy: To the operating room!

I’m sorry WHAT the cacnia is stuck to her hair not her!

Nurse Joy: Try and hold still! Harley I’m gonna need your help!

I’m really confused haha.

Harley: Right away! I’ll see you guys later okay?

15:50

May: Wow... that poor girl :<

I’m sure Jessie would really appreciate that comment May.

Max: I didnt know you could get hurt that bad practicing.

May: ack- Well I’ll have to do it all the same!

Stop scaring her max.

And then James and Meowth decide to steal all of their pokemon so that Jessie can win.

16:17

It’s the best character again but in a higher quality image!

May decides to go and practice with Ash, but as soon as she sends out her squirtle he’s grabbed by a GIANT ROBOT ARM. Along with Pikachu.

also I’ve decided Squirtle is a boy because he has an 83 percent chance to so why not.

James: Two down!

Meowth: And only hundreds more to go!

“If we’d planned it it wouldnt have worked at all”

16:57

Team Rocket thing but with only Meowth and James.

17:30

Max: Arent they missing someone?

Brock: Ya maybe Jessie got fired or something.

Giovonnie cant fire her he killed her parents!

17:57

:Sad Music playing in the background:

Harley: They’re hopelessly tangled together.

Chancy: :Sadly: Chancy...

Nurse Joy: I’m afraid that

We’ll have to resort to amputating your hair.

That’s a better end to the sentence anyways.

Jessie: No way! Get your claws away from me!

Sizzor: Scissor Scissor!

And I give this a title of belonging in a pokemon joke book.

Jessie: :Nearly faints:

Nurse Joy: Harley can you bring in your friends for moral support?

Harley: Right away.

18:20

Pokemon bring grabbed by arm thing.

Ash: Stop! Come back!

Harley: Ariados! Come out!

See now we get to see an truly epic pokemon

May: Hey, Harley what’s up?

PEOPLE’S POKEMON ARE BEING STOLEN AND SAVING THEM ISNT A SPECIFICALLY NICE GESTURE TOWARDS YOU IT’S JUST SOMETHING ANY HALF DECENT HUMAN BEING WOULD DO THAT’S WHAT.

18:50

Harley uses spider web on the balloon and then May sent out Cumbusken to use sky uppercut to... idk break open the metal cage.

9:35

James: Meowth! Use Fury Swpies and get us out of this web!

GUYS MEOWTH IS A POKEMON REMEMBER

Then Squirtle jumps out of May’s arms and uses a new move! Because I’ve watched the anime for so long i instantly identified it as ice beam! and it’s REALLY POWERFUL. Then James and Meowth fly away.

20:00

May: Squirtle... Was that an ice bean attack?

damn right it was. Now he might actually be useful in the contest.

Ash: You’re right it was! Somehow it learnt a new attack without you even teaching it how!

Max: Pretty lucky huh?

Brock: I bet that’s his way of thanking you for all of the love and support you’ve been giving him.

aww

20:30

May: Does that mean you’re ready to win this contest with me?

Squirtle: Squirt Squirtle! (Ya :D)

Ash: Those guys saved all our Pokemon, so we ow em a bit thank you!

Pikachu: :waves at May: Pika Pika! (Thank you!!)

20:40

May: Not us, it was actually Harley who stopped that ballon with Adriados’s cool spierweb!

May you’re still too modest just give him partial credits and FINALLY YOU COMPLIMENT HIS POKEMON.

Harley: Oh stop I was more than happy just to help out!

May: Well Anyway, thanks again and good luck in the contest tomorrow.

Harley: Yeah.

(May you still need to enter the contest)

21:11

Jessie: So let me get this straight... You actually captured all of their pokemon so I could win?

James: Then we failed but that was the plan.

Meowth: Those Lousey twerps messed up another victory!

NICE HAIRCUT i’d change the headband though orange doesnt really fit maybe do green like the earings.

Jessie: It doesnt really matter now because with my charming new looks and talent im going to win I just know it! Me and you Cacnia!

Confidence is great she should get the ribbon.

21:45

May finally goes to get her thing!

May: What?!? what do you mean my pass is invalid D:

No need to worry May she can get it for you.

The girl clarifies that the pass wont work and that it closed at 10.

May: But I was told that this entree pass would work and that it was at 11!

Girl: Whoever told you that was badly mistaken. Sorry.

Max: Well looks like Harley strikes again.

Isnt that the same of a Pokemon episode

ah so it was Rides not Strikes okay.

Brock: My guess is that he really was helping out at the clinic but he was only doing that to gain your trust May.

Or the completely reasonable explanation that he just was mistaken. I mean, he was only 1 hour off.

22:30

Harley: Some may call it holding a grudge. I call it taking revenge.

Those are two completely separate concepts you can do both.

33:38

Lilian: Good morning! How’s everyone?

May: Lilian?

Lilian: Hey? What? Feelin down today?

May: uh..

Lilian: Haha, I know that was a terrible joke wasn’t it? Sorry!

Lilian: What seems to be the problem?

Girl: Apparently someone gave her bad information about using her Hoenn pass here, and about the deadline.

Lilian: Well that wasn’t very nice at all! Hmm... Oh yes! I was about to report something!

Girl: What?!?

Lilian: Yesterday on the field some intruders attempted to steal all of our cooridator’s Pokemon! And the hero who stepped up to save the day was none other than this dear girl May!

1. You cant intrude on a field and 2. ...and Harley... but whatever...

Girl: Ya? So without you there wouldnt have been any pokemon left and we wouldnt have had a contest at all?

Lilian: That’s it exactly! What’d you say?

break the rules ALRIGHT ANYTHING FOR OUR MAIN CHARACTER.

Girl. Right I did just remember i got may’s renewal and pass registration yesterday I must’ve misplaced it.

hahaha just go with what the boss says. Now may is in the contest.

14:28

she leaves and may is in the contest wooo.

Harley is upset about this.

-Conclusion-

WOO COOL I’m doing another one which is the episode after this. The reason is because @this-is-a-error will PROBABLY LIKE HARLEY A LOT and I realized that there were some episodes that had harley but not Drew and I should review them so that Error can watch them. There is gonna be one more and thenI’ll be done for probably like another year unless somebody reeaally wants another one and tells me. These take a very long time to do.

#contestshipping #coordinator harley #pokemon #may #pokeani

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strawberry-lemonade · 4 years

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dont read this im just seeing if it works, its unedited and currently shit

"Excuse me, but I happen to think Mávri gáta is hilarious. Those puns are spot on."

Aria opened her mouth and paused, before closing it again.

"Zào Fortuna has got spots right?."

"Wait were you trying to aim a pun at her, but then forgot if she had spots?

"Uh, maybe..."

"Dude, you're an idiot in every sense of the word."

Aria hung her head.

"...I know."

"That's nice."

Aria threw a pillow at her before exploding in a fit of giggles.

"Mooncaaaake! You're supposed to give me a hug and say sorry!"

Marinette sighed and blew her nails before turning to look at Aria.

"We both know how that goes down."

Aria sighed and stood up.

"Have you heard from Adrien in the past few days?"

"You know what? I haven't."

"Last time I talked to him, he told me he got a boyfriend."

"He did? Why didn't I know about that?"

"Babe, weren't you on the other line?"

"Uh... I think I fell asleep."

"Wow. You really need to stop staying up all night on commissions."

"Speaking of, any news about that stuff?"

"Well, from what I've heard, my little sister from another mister is traveling to Gotham because her fashion business has taken off. 'The mysterious designer MDC has bypassed Gabriel Agreste in the polls!'

"Well, what you heard is true-'

"I also heard that you get to stay in Wayne Manor and bring a friend. Maybe Sabine?"

"What? And risk her finding out that I parade around the city in spots every night? No thanks."

"Hm. Chloe?"

"The invitation would be wasted. She's already going to Gotham with her mom."

"What about Alya?"

"Since 2 heroes will be out of commission, Rena is going to be needed here."

"I don't know."

Aria collapsed on the bed with a groan before sitting up and smirking.

"Lila."

"Okay. Your guessing privileges have been revoked."

"Noooooo! How else will I find out who you're going to take?!"

"By asking. Like a normal person."

"How dare you assume that I'm normal."

"Now I'm beginning to wonder if I should actually tell you."

"Okay, okay! I'll shut up! Just please tell me who, so I don't have to stay up till 3, guessing."

"I wanted to ask you."

"Uh, I will give you an entire list of reasons why I shouldn't come. Plus, I don't really think they'd let me bring the cat."

"I'm asking right now, and if they say no, then I'll politely decline the invitation."

"I don't want you to miss ou-"

"They replied!"

"What? Let me see!"

Aria scrambled off the chaise and scurried over to Marinette, tripping in the process.

"Wait! Let me get up!"

Aria jumped up and stumbled into the desk.

Marinette clicked the email and recited it aloud.

"Dear MDC, your friend's cat will be allowed. If you need to arrange anything to bring your cat on the plane, please do not hesitate to ask.

Aria squealed and hugged Marinette.

"Ok. If we can start packing now, I'll come with you."

"Why do we have to pack now? The trip isn't until Saturday and it's only Wednesday! Can't we just enjoy the first sleepover we've had in a month?"

"Babe, please? I hate procrastinating."

"What are you talking about? You love procrastinating!"

"I don't love it, It just happens to be my default."

"Same difference!"

"Um, no, not the same difference."

"Nyah."

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"Dante. I am begging you. Don't turn off the computer yet."

"Aria. it's almost 1 A.M and we both have class tomorrow."

"I knoooow! But I put my fucking heart into this, and if you turn it off right now, it will delete and I have no way of saving it."

"Aria. Go to bed now."

"Nooooo! I have to finish it!"

"Fine. But as soon as the clock gets to 1. I'm turning everything off. Just because you're my favorite doesn't mean I'll let you get away with anything."

"Boi! I let you get away with so many illegal things! Can I not just stay up for another hour to finish a damn design?!"

"Aria?"

"Hi, Minette."

"Are you gonna stay up again while binge-ing on coffee?"

"Maybe..."

"Marinette. Please tell my idiot sister that she needs sleep too."

"Aria-"

"Noooo! My favorites are teaming up to defeat me!"

"Aria. Go. To. Bed."

"No!"

Aria jumped up, seized the computer, shot into the bathroom.

"Ha! Now you can't stop me from finishing this!"

"Okay. I give up. Marinette, she's yours now."

Dante slowly backed out of the kitchen with his arms raised.

"Aria. Come out. Please. It's not a sleepover if it's only one person. Plus I need someone to binge-watch movies with!"

"...What kind of movies?"

"Um, MIB International, Charlie's Angels, Hanna, Atomic Blonde, La Femme Nikita-"

"I'm in. Just give me a second."

The sound of shuffling around could be heard in the unusually silent house. The bathroom door opened to show a dark room a few seconds later, and Aria emerged holding a closed laptop.

"I thought it wasn't going to save?"

"Yeah uh, I lied. I just wanted to keep working."

"Geez. I bet you'll be the only person in Gotham like this."

"Well, I do try to be unique!"

"Okay, we need to finish packing."

"But what about the movies?!"

"We'll watch them while we pack."

"Yay!"

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Five movies and two panic attacks later:

"Mooncake! Do you know where my-"

"Beanie? Downstairs in the tardis."

"Oh my gosh, thank you! I need to take a shower, are you almost finished packing?"

"Yeah, two more outfits and I'll be done."

"Kay. My phone is charging next to the window, the password is 314159, the flashy purple app turns on the TV."

With that, Aria walked out of the room and shut the door. Not even 2 minutes later, the sound of running water could be heard, along with the song 'Consideration' was blasting through the house. Marinette shook her head and laughed.

"Geez Ember. Too loud."

Marinette folded the last outfit and placed it in her suitcase. Walking over to the window, she was attacked by Kiro.

“Ack! Get off!”

Marinette started to try and shake the cat off and Kiro released her leg. She jumped onto the bed and yanked her legs up to avoid any further scratches. The door slammed open to reveal a soaking wet Aria in a towel. She still had soap bubbles in her hair and it had stuck to her face while she was running.

“I heard a screech! Is everything okay?”

Marinette stared for a second longer before laughing so hard she fell off the bed.

“OH MY GOSH! Did you just- holy crap! The cat just jumped on me!”

“...are you freaking kidding me? I literally jumped out of the shower to see what in the world was going on. I thought you were being abducted.”

“I’m so sorry! I just-” Marinette collapsed into another fit of giggles.

“Okay, since you’re obviously fine, I’m gonna go finish my shower. Next time, don’t screech unless it’s an emergency. Now my clothes are wet because of my idiocy. Goodbye, Little Missy Macaron.”

Aria walked out of the room, leaving Marinette to try and clean up the water mess. She just threw a towel over the puddle.

Aria walked into the bathroom while shaking her head slowly. She picked up her phone and pressed shuffle on her playlist. Once again, a song started blasting through the house.

————

Marinette grabbed Aria’s phone and unlocked it. She pressed the purple icon that Aria had told her about and clicked the red power button at the top. Nothing happened.

Right. The TV is downstairs.

Marinette sighed and checked under the bed before leaving the safety of the mattress. She picked up her two suitcases and took them downstairs. 5 minutes later, the sound of gunshots and suspenseful music coming from the living room rivaled the pop music coming from the upstairs bathroom.

—————-

Dante, Evita, and Armando came home to three girls shouting and running around, with another standing off to the side and filming. Chloe and Alya had come over to help after Aria had gotten out of the shower. Though it quickly turned into Chloe chasing Aria around and trying to get her to put on some clothes that weren’t covered in paint, and Alya filming Marinette freaking out about losing her deodorant.

“Dante! I stole your Pikachu boxers because they were in my drawers!” Aria ran past him, a disgruntled Chloe in hot pursuit.

“Why do I care?”

“Just thought you should know in case you start looking for them while I’m gone!”

“Speaking of being gone, shouldn’t you guys get going? Your flight leaves in 4 hours.”

“Crap! Evita! Do you have work soon? Can you drive us to the airport?”

“Can’t you guys just bike?”

Aria stopped and stared at Evita incredulously. Chloe didn't slow down quick enough and slammed both girls into the ground.

“Okay, are you stupid? Because we have like, 4 bags each, and the airport is like 45 miles away. ”

“Okay. I’ll take you, but I do have to work soon so we have to go now.”

“Okay. Akiv! Stop! Do you have your bags?”

“Yes, Ember.”

“Mousinette! Are you ready?”

“I NEED DEODORANT.”

“We can get some at the airport.”

“GAH! Okay, fine. Let’s go.”

The three girls ran to give Alya a hug before they left.

“Bye Als! Love you!”

“Adios, Vixen! Te Quiero!”

“Salut Alya!”

——————-

ONE EXCRUCIATINGLY LONG CAR RIDE LATER:,

Marinette, Aria, and Chloe stepped out of the Envoy and took their bags out of the trunk.

“Zai Jian, Evita! Te Quiero mucho!”

“Adios Mija! Je t’aime!”

Aria gave Evita a hug before slinging her book bag and purse over her shoulder and pulling her suitcase over to the entrance. The girls watched the car drive off before turning and walking into the airport.

“Ay Dios Mio…”

“What?”

“Look at the lines!” Aria gestured over to about fifty people standing in front of a counter.

“Oh, mon Dieu.”

“Um, no. Look at your tickets. We have first-class. Which is the line over there.” Choe pointed over to a short line with only a few people.

“Oh, thank goodness.” Marinette sighed as she scanned over her plane ticket.

“Wait, really?” Aria scrambled for the small slip of paper in her wallet, accidentally dropping it.

A young male, probably around 15, picked it up. He smiled and held it out to her.

“Here you go, m’lady”

“Thanks, bro,” Aria grunted.

The boy froze for only a second, but it was long enough for her to pluck the leather contraption out of his hand and walk away with the other girls. When they were out of earshot, they all burst out laughing.

“Oh my gosh! Did you see his face when you called him ‘bro’?!”

“That was hilarious,” Aria wiped tears from her eyes.

“Welp, now we know how she keeps guys away.”

“Who knew it was so simple?”

“No. It’s simple for me. I am the Goddess of repellent. You two are mere mortals.”

“She’s right! Oh, Great One! We are unworthy of your presence, but we beg to learn your ways!” Marinette got down on one knee, with one hand over her heart and the other being held out to Aria.

“Oh, get up Mooncake. They’re looking at us crazy again.” Chloe pulled the smaller girl onto her feet and ruffled her hair.

Marinette giggled, then bowed and took Aria’s hand.

“I am forever indebted to you for teaching me.” She kissed the brunette’s hand before standing up straight again.

“Mooncake, I love you, but that was the weirdest thing you’ve ever done.”

“Thanks, Abelle.”

“No problem babe.”

Aria rolled her eyes.

“Next!”

The girls looked up to see it was their turn in line.

“Please place your bags in the designated area.” The lady behind the desk gestured to a wire container.

Marinette looked to the side and placed her suitcase into the basket. The other girls quickly followed suit.

“Names?”

“Marinette Dupain-Cheng.”

“Aria Couture.”

“Chloe Bourgeois.”

The lady typed their names into the computer before waving them away. Marinette saw the dull look in her eyes and pulled out 3 macarons before whispering something and smiling.

“Excuse me, Madame? Here are a few macarons. I hope you have a nice day!”

Marinette picked up her bags and walked away with her friends. She didn’t miss the small smile that appeared on the woman’s face.

“So, what’d you do to the cookies?”

“Let’s just say the rest of her week will be much better.”

“Minette, I have absolutely no idea what you're implying, and at this point, I'm too scared to ask.”

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“This is why I hate flying. I’m already exhausted and we haven’t even been at the airport for 2 hours.” Marinette groaned.

“We’re done with all the security stuff, and our suitcases are already boarding the plane, which basically means we can currently do whatever we want. And don’t you still need deodorant?”

“Ugh. You’re right. Let’s go.”

Aria grinned and walked towards a sandwich restaurant.

“Aria, where are you going? The toiletries place is over there.” Marinette pointed to a little kiosk next to the bathrooms.

“Come on. You didn’t really think we would get deodorant before we got food, did you?”

“...I am kind of hungry…”

“Let’s go then!”

Aria grabbed Marinette’s right hand and Chloe’s left hand and yanked them over to the restaurant.

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“Flight Number 763, First class, Now boarding.”

Aria jolted awake at the sound of the announcement. She looked over at Chloe and Marinette sleeping peacefully and contemplated waking them up. She'd rather not lose an eye, or two.

Chloe woke up as the brunette picked up a small pink bookbag.

“Good morning Chlo,” Aria yawned.

“...hi Ari.”

Grabbing all of their backpacks, she took the tickets and passports out and walked over to the admittance booth.

“Tickets please."

“Here,” Aria handed him all three tickets and passports.

Aria looked up at the man in the booth.

“Can we go in or do you need sleeping beauty over here to confirm something,” Aria pointed at Marinette.

“Um. You can go in…”

“Thanks, have a nice day!”

The girls walked to the plane and found their seats quickly. Chloe helped Aria set Marinette down and put the carry-on bags in the capsules above them. Both girls fell back asleep about 10 minutes after they buckled up.

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Bunni’s Rune Factory Sequel Thoughts/Wishes/OCs N Stuff!

Just my misc ideas for stuff I’d love to see in the series, and maybe some ocs hmm hmm~!

* Maybe have a town that’s more upgradeable or changeable as the story progresses? I expected something like that with the princess points in RF4, that you could support the various businesses and see the shops get new fancier sprites and stuff! And maybe have characters who start off just being unemployed npcs and then can start new businesses as the game goes on? Like if dylas could have been the fish salesman instead of it being a nameless npc. And maybe even after big events in the story the town could have stuff get destroyed, to show how dangerous the villains are? And then you could rebuild but it wouldnt be the same as it once was. * More activities for your pets to do! I like that they can help with farming but maybe they could unlock more tasks to automate as the game goes on? or maybe just have more customization for their farming, like you can choose what seeds they automatically plant, or set a rota for them to rest and swap fields. Maybe give them stats so certain ones could specialize in watering/planting/smashing rocks/etc? * Maybe have more random farm events like rune rain and typhoons? possible idea: period bandit raids or attacks by monsters. You set monsters as guards and if they win then they can farm dungeon items from the enemies, giving you a good way to gain them without having to revisit the same place ad nauseum. Or maybe have a random inspector event where you have a chance of winning a best farm award or something? And maybe when characters randomly visit your house they could actually do something instead of just standing there. Maybe they could comment on your crops? like, say yay if you have something they like, or give random tips, or small bonuses like casting a gigantifier effect on a random crop or restoring some health. Or depending on the character and their relationship with you, maybe they could do negative effects? Also i wish one of the endgame bonus awards could be the ability to turn these random events off entirely if you want, instead of just delaying it. * The possibility of maybe having a negative relationship bar as well as a positive one! So characters could maybe become rivals instead of just friends or indifferent, with nothing else. And maybe you could even have some points in both and have a friendly rivalry? * Characters having more potential interactions with each other outside of just you. I think it’d be nice if when you marry someone then the batchelor/ettes you dont pick could have random event chances where they marry each other. And maybe the player could influence who they end up with, depending on how you interact with the two of them? Play matchmaker! Help them find their happy ending even though you rejected them. Consolation for guilt! * Also can we maybe start having friendship options for each character’s main plot? Let me be able to resolve their sad backstory even if I dont date them, the only difference when I date them should be that I date them. Not that arthur never reconciles with his estranged mother unless we just happen to bump uglies :P * Adding LGBTQ marriage options would be hella amazing in every way, jesus christ please can we have this. Or like.. if we cant, then can we have like... less gay?? I dunno, i just feel like I’m sadder about not having gay marriage when the characters are CONSTANTLY teasing that some of them MIGHT have same sex romances yet nobody is allowed to ever do it. Stop rubbing it in. Its somehow more painful than not having any LGBTQ representation at all, just having this sort of ‘its not representation and it never will be but we’re gonna make it look like it just to torment you’. * i dunno, I feel like probably knowing the company we’re more likely to get a gay npc couple or something in the next game and still have to wait ages for an actual romanceable candidate. Theyre not exactly ahead of the times on the subject. BUT WE CAN HOPE!!! * I want Porcoline to cameo in the next game, or us to hear about how the porco restaurant family is doing. I got the most attatched to them! And I hope the De Saint Coquille family continues to cameo in every main rune factory game, though I think it’d be hard to top this incarnation of them! OH, it’d be amazingly awesome if the next De Saint Coquilles could be the direct descendants of Porco’s family and he cameos as a grandpa?? It could work if the sequel gives a canon love interest to lest/frey, like how raven cameo’d in rf4 and her dialogue heavily implies she ended up with micah. So if frey ended up with arthur or dylas or lest ended up with margaret, then they could be a new part of the de saint coquille family in this sequel cameo. or just be ambiguously referenced so that the player can decide which of the three marriages happened. Oh, or another idea is maybe you meet a branch of the de saint coquilles that’re all elves, if maybe the next game could be set in the elven kingdom? And they could reference being descended from porcoline who did a lot of work on human-elven diplomacy back in the day. Also maybe we could get another female character filling the usual role of the food-loving head of the family with the silly art style? I’ve heard that there was one female de saint coquille in one of the spinoff wii games i havent played but it’d be cool to see another. * Can we have two-seater monsters to ride? So you could go on dates atop an elephant! * Maybe be able to select one monster as your official pet? And it can live inside the house and have a lil food bowl and do more interactions with it, and have friends talk about it when they visit and maybe they can feed it snacks? And it could help raise friendship with different people depending on their preferences for different monsters. I just really like the monsters and I want to make them feel like a part of the family! * A possible very unlikely idea- maybe that monster could become human in a secret postgame quest, and be like your second child? I miss being able to have multiple children like in rf3, but I didnt like how children all looked identical and had basically zero personality in that game. This could be a good way to have two distinct kids! It’d be too tricky to give each monster a unique gijinka form like RF4′s guardians though, so just make it that they become a 100% human character with one set appearance and maybe a couple different colourschemes. maybe it could be that your close monster friend dies sacrificing itself to save you from like... an evil homunculus experimental weapon or something. And then they’re revived using the same magic that created that creature, their soul possesses it and they get to be this artificial human, and they get to have one preset appearance with a good excuse for why! And it could just be super cute and awesome to have them be so excited to finally talk to you and tell you how much they love you! And they could have funny sweet interactions getting used to human things, and their big sibling could help them. And they could be really good at helping with chores in the monster barn, just imagine them hugging all their old monster friends and they trust them completely and they can lead them off in a line like baby ducklings~! And maybe they can have random dialogue saying like ‘hey this monster wanted me to tell you they love you, mama!’ * It would be really cool if we could get a game with a customiseable protagonist, or even just the ability to choose between a few preset options for different races. or just a protagonist of the different races in general, like we’ve had a bazillion humans so cant we have an elf or dwarf? Micah being a were-monster was the entire appeal of that game, I think having another unusual protagonist would recapture that hype! But I really like the idea of having a customizeable protag who could be any of the main three races. I mean not much would have to change depending on who you pick, it’d be relatively less trouble to add in. Maybe just some occasional slightly different scenes to show the different perspectives? or they start with some boosts to different initial stats, or maybe have different aesthetics for the house you get? oooh, or maybe different aesthetics for all the outfits they can get! Like how theyre different for the genders in rf4, but they could have like a human/dwarf/elf cultural flair to each thing. I’d also love if there were more outfits than just pyjamas/bathing suit/8 different colours for default outfit. * I think I’ve mentioned this before but I had a cool idea for if a RF game had a ghost protagonist, now we know ghosts exist in this universe. You could play as both the male and female characters simultaneously, and just select which is the ghost and which is human! So there’d still be two routes with incentive to replay the game, but whichever character you dont pick gets to be the sidekick character with their own different personality and you can get them married to various sub-batchelors maybe? like, the assistant charrie’s romances are different from the ones you can get if you picked them as protagonist. Anyway. the setup would be that the ghost has to haunt a human in order to affect the real world, so thats why you have two characters. The more normal idea would be that protagonist is the human who’s haunted by an assistant/butler type ghost, but I also like the idea that you play as the ghost and you boss around this human to do all the heavy lifting. Like, instead of starting off and getting amnesia somehow, you start off alive and then die and have to possess someone in order to fullfill your unfinished business of raising this farm. You’re the ghost of the person who owned this farm, and you were sleeping here underground waiting for the chosen one you could bond with so you could get back to farming, but you slept too long and the place has got all overgrown and you start again from zero. And then the protagonist could be clueless about everything cos a century has passed, not just cos theyre amnesiac again. * Other excuses that aren’t just amnesia again: protagonist has moved here from another country, protagonist was some sort of sheltered princess who’s never worked a day in their life, protagonist is simply someone who’s never run a farm before and honestly who cares if you start off as someone who already lived here for years? Just have it like youre a loner who’s made a resolution to start being more social now, or some other reason. * A possible idea for a backstory- you are formerly a swashbuckling pirate who just decided to settle down. I dunno why but I think that’d make for a nice unique protagonist perspective! * Also maybe if we do amnesia again we can do something with it? Can we actually have an event eventually about regaining our memories? I was expecting in RF4 there’d be a reveal that before your amnesia you used to be a sechs empire soldier, since all we know about you is that you’re the one who had the rune stones in the beginning of the game. Only other explanation I can think of for that is that there’s some sort of earthmate country somewhere that creates these stones, or you were a merchant who somehow was selling such a rare artifact? I dunno, I still think that the ‘oh god i used to be evil’ twist would have been really really good! * Maybe it could be possible to have other ways to ‘choose’ a character, and get them to become an npc in your house and wander around? I dunno about you guys but I really loved all the themes of ‘found family’ in RF4 and wished there was an equivelant of the marriage routes where I could adopt volkanon as my grandpa or something. Or maybe have a bunch of orphan npcs you can adopt, as an option for if you have a same sex marriage? I just wished I could have made some sort of symbolic gesture to them to say ‘hey, you are my favourite of the non-dateable npcs, thank you’. * Also I’d really like to see a romanceable ghost! I just really think that now they revealed that ghosts are a thing that can exist, I wanna see more about ghosts. Some sort of bigger role to a ghost! * Also yes series please continue having adorkable monster people to marry, that was the entire reason i picked RF4 as my first game to play, lol! I am a bit sad though that all the girls in RF4 arent very monstery at all and all the boys are more monstery. Its a shame cos in RF3 there’s two super monstery girls with the best designs and personalities! I wanna play that game next, I wanna go backwards in order XD

#bunni plays rf4 #rune factory 4 #sorry for long post #i'd love to chat with people who have different ideas too!

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