also just saying i'd point and laugh if they killed leafstar like i think that's way overdue she's old and irrelevant and makes really bad decisions all the time she needs to go
// ASC WIND MILD SPOILERS
ok so i finished wind it was pretty banging. i would complain that sunbeam still isn't tied into the main narrative strongly enough for my liking, but a neat twist in the final chapters linked to sunbeam's actions earlier on in the book tied it all in together so i can't complain too too much?
at the same time tho i can't help but feel that it was very last minute. we can’t even joke any more that frostpaw is the only cat relevant to the main plot since nightheart’s been helping her out a ton over the past couple of books - meanwhile sunbeam is kinda just there most of the time until the very end of the book
if they really REALLY wanna impress me i wanna see a sick final mother/daughter showdown between berryheart and sunbeam with NO interference from nightheart whatsoever. he’s been dipping in and out of her business all arc so i really wanna see her grab her agency by the horns and have this moment for herself. no “i’m with you all the way nightheart" as they battle her together side by side i want this to be SUNBEAM’S moment and hers alone. nightheart needs to step the fuck back for a minute
ok so i finished wind it was pretty banging. i would complain that sunbeam still isn't tied into the main narrative strongly enough for my liking, but a neat twist in the final chapters linked to sunbeam's actions earlier on in the book tied it all in together so i can't complain too too much?
at the same time tho i can't help but feel that it was very last minute. we can’t even joke any more that frostpaw is the only cat relevant to the main plot since nightheart’s been helping her out a ton over the past couple of books - meanwhile sunbeam is kinda just there most of the time until the very end of the book
if they really REALLY wanna impress me i wanna see a sick final mother/daughter showdown between berryheart and sunbeam with NO interference from nightheart whatsoever. he’s been dipping in and out of her business all arc so i really wanna see her grab her agency by the horns and have this moment for herself. no “i’m with you all the way nightheart" as they battle her together side by side i want this to be SUNBEAM’S moment and hers alone. nightheart needs to step the fuck back for a minute
can i just say that i absolutely love that the single thing to pop off on this account is au art of turtle tail murdering tom. i love it when people come together to appreciate the things that should have been 💕
funnily enough my original design for him was actually inspired by tai lung and resembled him a lot more! tho upon redraw i decided to round him off just a tad cause my perception of him has changed a bit
weird ramble but i can't be the only one who thinks that yellowfang's name would've worked way better as a rename in the same vein as oneeye or halftail as opposed to being given the prefix yellow from birth for some reason. i like to think she went by something like smokeface before brokenstar renamed her out of spite lol